1994-1996考研英语作文

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1、1994年作文:PartⅣWriting(15points)DIRECTIONS:A.Title:ONMAKINGFRIENDSB.TIMELIMIT:40minutesC.Wordlimit:120-150words(notincludingthegivenopeningsentence)D.YourcompositionshouldbebasedontheOUTLINEbelowandshouldstartwiththegivenopeningsentence:“Asahumanbeing,onecanhardlydowithoutafriend.”E.Yourcompo

2、sitionmustbewrittenclearlyontheANSWERSHEET.OUTLINE:l.Theneedforfriends2.Truefriendship3.Myprincipleinmakingfriends一、审题本文题目是我们较为常见的关于交友的议论文。虽然关于友谊的文章很多，但要结构清晰仍需要解析友谊的真正内涵，指出友谊就是彼此帮助，互相促进学习。二、谋篇本文应按提纲所示分为三段：第一段为朋友的重要性。第二段解释友谊的含义。第三段说明自己的择友观。本文虽条理比较明了，但应注意呼应。三、写作误区1.跑题：本文虽与友谊有关，但不是单纯赞扬友谊的。有的考生

3、忽略了“交友”，而把笔墨浪费在赞扬友谊的珍贵上，因此被扣分也在情理之中。2.谋篇：本文应以说明议论为主，如果过多地举例描写，又无适当回扣主题，就会出现结构上的偏差，或者字数过多。四、范文评分标准115~13分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达清楚，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。Sample1(14points)OnMakingFriendsAsahumanbeing,onecanhardlydowithoutafriendandthefacthasbeenself-evident.Withoutthehelpofhonestfriends,wecanhardly

4、getoverthedifficultiesandhardshipswecomeacross.Moreover,havingnofriendsalsomeansthatthereisnobodyintheworldwithwhomwe7canshareourjoyandsorrow.Thuslonelinessistheonlytingleftforus.Somakingfriendsisaveryindispensablepartinourlife.Butnotallwhoarefriendlytoeachotherandenjoyeachother’scompany,in

5、thesocialgatheringscanbecalledtruefriends.Basedonmutualunderstandinginsteadofonmutualbenefit,truefriendshipmustbesincereandunconditional.Itconsistsinsincerity,mutualtrust,andself-sacrifice,bothintimesofhappinessandatmomentsofcrisis.Atruefrienddoesnotjusttelluswhatwewanttohearbutwilldowhathe

6、thinksisbestforusinthelongrun.Falsefriendship,however,willflatteruswhenwearecrownedwithsuccesswhiledesertuswhenweareindeepwaters.Therefore,truefriendshipistomakepeoplehelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Myprincipleinmakingfriendsistomakeasmanygoodfriendsaspossible.SowhenImakeafriend,Ifirstof

7、allmakesurewhetherheishonestorwicked.Aslongasheishonestandsincere,IknowthatIfindanotheracompanyinthewayofimproving.例文分析1．提纲（1）论证并得出结论：朋友为生活中不可缺少的一别分；（2）朋友的真正含义：真诚，互助互勉；（3）交友之道：真心，真诚。2．论点与谋篇本文以提纲为依据，层次清晰。首段采用先解释首句，而后自然引出论题——交友的方式，内容自然流畅。第二段的优点在于以总—分—总的方法写