雅思柱状图7-75分范文解密-智课教育出国考试

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1、智课网雅思备考资料雅思柱状图7-75分范文解密-智课教育出国考试雅思小作文与大作文难易程度不同，考生要给与同样的重视。今天，智课教育小编为大家带来的是雅思柱状图7-7.5分范文解密，希望考生能够多多学习。讲完了如何取得柱状图的6.5分，让我们在一起来看一下如何才能在柱状图中获得7-7.5的高分呢?首先，还是让我们一起先来回顾一下雅思小作文的评分标准，知道这些标准我们才能对症下药，直重要害，取得高分。雅思小作文之评分标准：Taskachievement(TA)(任务完成度):Summarizethegeneralfeatures/trends(总结归纳数据的走势和主

2、要特点)Selectimportantinformation(筛选重要信息)Compareandcontrastdata(对比数据)Cohesionandcoherence(CC):Whethertheresponsehasasuitablelayoutandlogicalorderingofpoints(文章是否条理清晰，行文有逻辑)Correctandappropriateuseofconnectives(是否正确使用衔接词)Lexicalresources(LR):Rangeandaccuracyofvocabulary;(词汇丰富度和准确度)Thecorr

3、ectformandspellingofthewords(词汇形式和拼写正确)Grammaticalrangeandaccuracy(GRA):Therangeandaccuracyoftensesandsentencestructure(时态和句式的丰富度和准确度)综上所述，雅思小作文有四大评分标准，从任务完成度，衔接和逻辑，词汇，以及语法丰富度和正确度中做出了要求。也就是说，只有很好的达到了这四大要求，一篇作文才能获得高分。下面我们就从这四大方面，来分析一篇7-7.5分柱状图范文。Thegraphsbelowshowcurrentratesofsecondar

4、yandhighereducationamongpeopleinvariouspartsoftheworld.Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Givenaretwocolumngraphscomparingtheratesofsecondaryandtertiaryeducationamongmalesandfemalesinvariousdifferentpartsoftheworld.WhileEurope

5、enjoysrelativelyhighlevelsofeducationoverall,itseemsthatpeopleinlessaffluentregionsarefarlesslikelytobeeducated.AllEuropeangirlsofschoolageand90percentofboysreceiveasecondaryeducation,comparedwithonly20percentofgirlsand10percentofboysinSub-SaharaAfrica,LatinAmericaandEastAsia,meanwhil

6、e,havemoderatelevelsofsecondaryeducation——between40and50forbothsexes.Withregardtohighereducation,thefiguresaremuchlowerthroughouttheworld.InEurope,some50percentofadultfemalesand45percentofadultmalesgainahighereducation.Conversely,only20percentoffemalesand25percentofmalesinSub-SaharanA

7、fricaattendcollegeoruniversity.ThefiguresforLatinAmericaandEastAsiaaremarginallyhigherthanthoseofAfrica.AlsonoteworthyisthefactthatfemalesaremorelikelytoreceiveasecondaryeducationinallregionsexceptEastAsia,butlesslikelytoreceiveatertiaryeducationinallregionsexceptEurope.(196words)下面我们

8、就四大评分