1、尽管形式多样，但总的来说，主要提出两个要求。描写是其中之一，但描写在我们看来只是几句话带过的“述题”部分，仅为引子。重头戏是第二个要求，即要求考生看到事件背后的深刻主题而谈出些有哲理的观点，这才是评判作文质量的关键所在。下面两个例子可清楚说明这点。 例子一：请简要描述此事并就“是否应该鼓励大学生去探险”这个话题谈谈你的看法。(长宁区)； 例子二：对市民遛狗(walk the dog)的描述；自己养宠物的经历或社会上养宠物的情况；你对养宠物的看法。 而浦东新区在这方面的要求更为显豁。“阐述如何过生日更有意义。” 从本
2、次考试学生作文呈现的情况来看，学生在审题和具有逻辑性地表达方面还是有不少问题的。下面我们就浦东新区作文如何进行审题和如何进行具有逻辑性地表达方面作一些分析。 Directions:Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 每个人每年都会过生日。请你简要描述一下你通常是怎么过生日的，并阐述如何过生日更有意义。 很多同学对“有意义”这一概念感到困惑。何谓“
4、的深层含义有更为精准的把握，这是摆在所有英语教师和专家面前的关键性问题。第一篇以从句的应用灵活、语言的哲理性取胜： My birthday never means cakes capped with inviting icing or throwing a crazy party. Usually, a simple piece of cake is bought for my mother, not for me, for I want to thank her for bri
5、nging my life and soul to this world and honor the hardships she had been through during her pregnancy. I would also feel needed when part of my money is donated to charity on that day. My birthday-just an ordinary day-spells two words: respect a
6、nd give. Birthday should be extended to a deeper thinking of life. Days are gone when we were surrounded by those who loved us and were soaked in "happy birthday to you." Instead, it should be our turn to care about others with our respect and
7、 affection. No man can live in this society without being connected to others. All we’ve gained is largely due to others’ devotion and sacrifice. Our birthday has provided us with a platform to pay back what we’ve taken for granted and cherish what we’ve
8、 obtained. Show your gratitude and respect; give a helping hand to those who are desperate for help. All that makes our world a better pl
