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1、应试策略一、扣题二、观点明朗三、结构合理(分三段,每段以总-分-总形式)(1)Topicsentence(主题)(2)论点(分论点)(3)Conclusion(总结)四、不要标新立异五、语言使用1、中式英语(1)Failureisthemotherofsuccess(2)Successalwaysgoesbehindfailure(3)Thereisbambooinone’sheart(4)Onehasawell-thought-outplan2、词性乱用(1)Asweallknow,noonecanalwayssuccessinone’sdailylifeandwork—>Succee
2、dvi(2)Ihavesomedifficultinsleepingatnightnowadays—>Difficultyn(3)Youdon’tplaythegamelikeIdo—>As(4)It’ssuchsmallthatyoucannotseeit—>So3、时序错乱(1)Theycomealwayslatetoschool—>Alwayscome,beEg:Ever,neverseldomsoonsometimesalmostscacely,hardly,nearly,even(2)Ishouldhavenotgonethere—>ShouldnothaveEg:Never,
3、seldom,rarely,neither,nornotonly,nosooner,hardly(3)NeverIhaveheardofsuchathing—>NeverhaveI4、词的累赘(1)Ifirstbegantofeelsickwhenwewentintotheclassroom(2)Inthismodernworldoftoday,peoplelikebeingdressedwell(3)Icannothardlyreadhisletterbecauseofhisillegiblehandwriting5、成分不足(1)However.Ithinknotnecessaryt
4、oworryaboutfailure(2)Idon’tthinkitisnecessarytoworryaboutfailure(3)Idon’tthinkitnecessarytoworryaboutfailure6、代词的指示关系含糊(1)Shetoldmysisterthatshewaswrong(2)I‘mwrong”shesaidtomysister7、缺少逻辑主语(1)Togetupearly,theclockwassetatsix(2)Togetupearly,hesettheclockatsix8、缺少修饰语(1)wehavemanywell-knownscientist
5、sathomeandabroad(2)Wehavemanyscientistswell-knownathomeandabroad(3)TheJapanesemountaineersentusthefullstoryofhisrescuefromTibet(4)FromTibettheJapanesemountaineersentusthefullstoryofhisrescue六、句子生动1、使用等立分句(相当于中文排比句)(1)Asheisahero,Ihonourhim;asheisacoward,Isneakathim(2)Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesa
6、ysbutalsobywhathedoesEg:And,notonly…..butalso,either…orneither….norboth….and2、使用从句(1)Johnisanewstudent.Hecomesfromasouthernprovince.Hespeaksadialect.Wefindittounderstandhisdialect—>John,anewstudentfromasouthernprovince,speakadialectwhichisdifficultforustounderstand(2)Whilewaitingforthemeetingtobe
7、gin.theytalkedabouteachother.Theytalkedaboutthewoman’svolleyballteam.TheteamhadwonvictoriesinTokyo—>Whilewaitingforthemeetingtobegin,theytalkedaboutthevictorieswonbythewomen’svolleyballteaminTokyo2、使用成语(1)throughthicka