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1、MichelleFeng2014-06-05•Electricity写作思路：•I基本提纲•1.电在我们的生活中用途广泛。（列举2-3个用途）•2.没有电，生活会变的不方便，不舒适。•3.因此要节约用电，简单谈谈如何节约用电。•4.首尾。合理，明智的利用电。•PS:2,3段也可以和成一段，但需注意连贯性。•（即用好过渡词、句）•Electricity写作思路：(I)•1.电在我们的生活中用途广泛。（列举2-3个用途）•Weuseelectricitytodo….athome(atschool,atwork)•Weuseelectricityfordoing
2、….athome(atschool,atwork)•Electricityisusedfordoing…athome(atschool,atwork)•Electricityisusedtodo…athome(atschool,atwork)•…makeourlivesmore….,…helpusworkmoreefficiently•2.没有电，生活会变的不方便，不舒适。MichelleFeng2014-06-05•Withoutelectricity,lifewouldbelesscomfortable….•wewouldnotbeabletodo….
3、•3.因此要节约用电，简单谈谈如何节约用电。•Wecansaveelectricitybydoingsth.•Ifweleavehome,weshoulddo….•4.收尾。合理，明智的利用电。•Weshouldmakefulluseofelectricityinawise/properway.•写作思路：基本提纲II•1.电非常有用，是我们的好帮手/好仆人。（agoodservant)（列举2-3个用途）•2.电也很危险，是一个危险的仆人。（adangerousservant)•因此要安全用电，简单谈谈如何安全用电。•3.收尾。合理，安全的利用电。•El
4、ectricity写作思路：(II)•1.电非常有用，是我们的好帮手/好仆人。（agoodservant)（列举2-3个用途）•Weuseelectricitytodo….athome(atschool,atwork)•Weuseelectricityfordoing….athome(atschool,atwork)MichelleFeng2014-06-05•Electricityisusedfordoing…athome(atschool,atwork)•Electricityisusedtodo…athome(atschool,atwork)•…ma
5、keourlivesmore….,…helpusworkmoreefficiently•2.电也很危险，是一个危险的仆人。（adangerousservant)•因此要安全用电，简单谈谈如何安全用电。•It’sadangerousservant.Weshouldbealwayscarefulwithit.•Don’tdo…when…..;Do..when•Wearenotallowedtodowhen….•Wemustn’t/mustdo3.收尾。合理，安全的利用电。•Weshouldelectricityinaproper/rightway.•Commo
6、nerrors:•1.Ifthereisnoelectricity,lifebecomesnotcolorful.••2.Electricitycanletair–conditioneropen.••3.Ifwetouchelectricalapplianceswithwethands,wewillbedie.MichelleFeng2014-06-05••4.Everyelectricalappliancesareneedelectricity.••5.Andtouchanyswitcheswhenourhandsarewetisnotallowed••
7、6.Withoutelectricity,wewouldcan’twatchtvtoo.••7.Washingmachinescanwashclothesmoreconvenient.••8.Computerscanrelaxyourselvesandhelpyouworkmoreefficiently.••9.Butifelectricityuseupinthefuture.ofcourse!peoplewillfeelfrightenedwithoutelectricity.•10.Theelectricityisdangerous.11.Becare
8、fulnottousealotofelectricalapplia
