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1、提纲式命题作文Directions:Inthissection,youareaskedtowriteacompositionentitledShouldpeopleowncarsornot?Yourcompositionshouldbebasedontheoutlinegivenbelow.Yourcompositionshouldbeatleast120words.Outline:1、有人赞成个人买车。2、也有人持相反观点。3、你的看法。ShouldPeopleOwnCarsorNot?ShouldPeopleownCars
2、ornot?Nowhavingacarismoreandmorepopular,somanyfamilyswanttobuyacar.Theythinkit’suseful.Someyoungsthinkit’scool,andmanypeoplethinkit’sconvenentwhentheyhaveaprivatecar.Theydon’tneedtowaitthecrowdedbus/sotheycangotoworkontime.It’ssavethetime.Andtheyalsocandrivethecargo
3、wherevertheywantto.Afamilycanhaveatraveltogethter.It’scomfortable.Inaword,theycanimprovethequalityoftheirlifewithacar.Especiallytheincreasingofprivatecarcanpromotetheeconomic.Itcanleadthedevelopmentofmanyindustries.It’sgoodforourcountry’sdeveloping.作文评分原则及标准14分–漂漂亮亮
4、:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,连贯性好,基本上语言无误。11分—清清楚楚:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。8分—马马虎虎:基本切题,有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯,语言错误相当多,其中一些是严重错误。5分—糊里糊涂:基本切题,表达思想不清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重语法错误。2分—一塌糊涂:条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎,或大部分句子都有错误,且多数为严重错误。Praise,AnImportantGiftSomepeoplethinkthatcritismcanchangeone’sviewoflif
5、e.However,manypeoplearguethatpraiseismoreimportant.Inmyopinion,praiseismoreprofitablethancritism.Praiseislikefreshair,withoutit,ourlifewillbecomeuninterestingandinhappy.Givingpraisedoesnotcostthegiveralot,but,thereceivercanlearnmuch.Therearemanypeoplewhosucceedatlas
6、twithapraise,Takemyselfforexample.Thoughithappenedalongtimeago,Irememberitclearly.ItwasasportsmeetingandIattendit.Atfirst,IwasveryconfidentandthoughtIwasthebestofthem,soIhadnotraining.Thetruthwas,duringtherace,manystudentsleftmebehind.ThenIwanttogiveupandwasfrustrat
7、ed.Fortunately,myPEteachercameandpattedonmyback:”Aslongasyousticktocontinue,successwillbelongtoyou.Ibelieveyou,comeon!”Hesaidwithasmile.Youknow,Iimproveddramaticallyandwontheprize.So,praiseisanimportantgift.试评分!!!写作对策内容是否紧扣主题,涵盖提示要点作文结构层次是否清晰语言表达是否流畅,有无重大语病,有无逻辑错误是否
8、能恰当的使用过渡性词语作文字数是否达到要求卷面是否整洁,书写是否漂亮写作体裁议论文说明文记叙文议论文开头常用句式Recently,theproblemof…hasarousedpeople’sconcern.…hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimpor