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1、四级写作--提纲式命题作文SampleInmodernworld,theeconomyisdevelopingfastandthepopulationisalsogrowingveryfast.Butdoyouknowourearth’shealthybecometerriblenow?Asayouthofthe21stcentury,whatshouldIdotoprotectourearth?Rapidly,increasing,isbecomingDirections:Inthissection,youareaskedtowrite
2、acompositionentitledShouldpeopleowncarsornot?Yourcompositionshouldbebasedontheoutlinegivenbelow.Yourcompositionshouldbeatleast120words.Outline:1、有人赞成个人买车。2、也有人持相反观点。3、你的看法。ShouldPeopleOwnCarsorNot?ShouldPeopleownCarsornot?Nowhavingacarismoreandmorepopular,somanyfamilyswan
3、ttobuyacar.Theythinkit’suseful.Someyoungsthinkit’scool,andmanypeoplethinkit’sconvenentwhentheyhaveaprivatecar.Theydon’tneedtowaitthecrowdedbus/sotheycangotoworkontime.It’ssavethetime.Andtheyalsocandrivethecargowherevertheywantto.Afamilycanhaveatraveltogethter.It’scomforta
4、ble.Inaword,theycanimprovethequalityoftheirlifewithacar.Especiallytheincreasingofprivatecarcanpromotetheeconomic.Itcanleadthedevelopmentofmanyindustries.It’sgoodforourcountry’sdeveloping.四级作文评分原则及标准14分–漂漂亮亮:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,连贯性好,基本上语言无误。11分—清清楚楚:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。8分—马
5、马虎虎:基本切题,有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯,语言错误相当多,其中一些是严重错误。5分—糊里糊涂:基本切题,表达思想不清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重语法错误。2分—一塌糊涂:条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎,或大部分句子都有错误,且多数为严重错误。Praise,AnImportantGiftSomepeoplethinkthatcritismcanchangeone’sviewoflife.However,manypeoplearguethatpraiseismoreimportant.Inmyopinion,praiseism
6、oreprofitablethancritism.Praiseislikefreshair,withoutit,ourlifewillbecomeuninterestingandinhappy.Givingpraisedoesnotcostthegiveralot,but,thereceivercanlearnmuch.Therearemanypeoplewhosucceedatlastwithapraise,Takemyselfforexample.Thoughithappenedalongtimeago,Irememberitclea
7、rly.ItwasasportsmeetingandIattendit.Atfirst,IwasveryconfidentandthoughtIwasthebestofthem,soIhadnotraining.Thetruthwas,duringtherace,manystudentsleftmebehind.ThenIwanttogiveupandwasfrustrated.Fortunately,myPEteachercameandpattedonmyback:”Aslongasyousticktocontinue,successw
8、illbelongtoyou.Ibelieveyou,comeon!”Hesaidwithasmile.Youknow,Iimproveddramaticallyandwontheprize.