书面表达训练之求助信写作

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1、求助信基本结构1.自我介绍，2.点明目的；3.叙述现状，告知问题4.寻求帮助,5.期盼回复。注意事项：1.通常情况下，使用一般现在时2.阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，言语要礼貌。可适当使用过渡词：first/tobeginwith;oreover/besides/what’smore/inaddition;inthemeanwhile;also使文章脉络清晰，条理清楚，有较强的层次感。可适当使用委婉句型：wouldyouliketo,begsb.todosth.,wouldlikesb.todosth.,I’msure来体现出作者的谦虚客气，诚恳朴实表达方式

2、运用多样化：如定语从句、目的状语从句、宾语从句的运用可增强文章的表达效果，提高了文章的表达档次自我介绍I’m…/mynameis…点明目的I’mwritingtoyouforsomehelp.I’mwritingalettertoyoutogetsomehelp.Iamsorrytobotheryou,butireallyneedyourhelpwith…叙述现状Ioftenfeelblueanddepressed.学习句型告知问题Ihavesomedifficulty/troubleindoingsomethingbecauseofmypoor…If

3、inditdifficultformetodosth.Iamnowconfrontedwiththefollowingdifficulties.ThereasonwhyIwritethisletteristhatIhavetroublewhenI....寻求帮助Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Ireallydon’tknowwhattodoandexpectyoutogivemeyouradvice/suggestions.Ihavenoideawhatishoulddoandlongforyouradvice.Iwoul

4、dliketoturntoyouforhelp.Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Facingsomuchdifficulty,ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.I’mindesperateneedofyourhelpyourhelpisurgentlyneeded.Iwouldappreciateanythingyoucandotohelpmewiththismatter.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucangivemesomesuggestionsonh

5、owtodosth.期盼回复LookingforwardtoyourreplyandI’llbegratefulforyourhelp.I’msureIcanmakegreatprogresswithyourhelpI’mwaitingforyourearlyreply.黄金模板Dear______,mynameis__________.I’mwritingtoyouto___________________.I_______________(yourcurrentsituation).(giveinformationtoshowtheadviserw

6、hyyouneedhelp)first,________________besides,____________.what’smore___________________.Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Wouldyouliketointroducetoussomegoodwaysto_________________________.LookingforwardtoyourreplyandI’llbegratefulforyourhelp.yourssincerely,_____

7、________练一练国内某家英文报纸设有一个求助信箱（letterstodrhelper）。请根据下列学生现状调查分析表中列出的信息，以高二学生王勇的名义，用英语给drhelper写一封短信。学生现状负担过重的原因每日在校时间9小时考试压力大作业多家长期望高每日作业时间3—4小时每日课外活动时间几乎没有,每日睡眠时间不足。Sample：DearDrhelper,Iamasenior2student.Iamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseicanhardlystandthegreatpressure.EverydayIha

8、vetostayatschoolforninehourstohavelesson.Beside