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1、Chapter8Revision,PolishingandtheFinalDraftRevisionQuestion:Howshouldwerevisethefirstortheseconddraft?RevisionWhetherabeginneroraprofessional,everywritermustrevise,thatis,gobackoverthefirstdraftortheseconddraftofathesis,rewritingunclearsentences,addingdetailsorexamples,crossingoutunnecessaryword
2、sorideas,andperhapsrearrangingparts.Inotherwords,neverhandinthefirstversionofanyparagraphoressay,butrevisethenrewrite,creatingthebestpaperofwhichyouarecapable.BrainstormReasonsforRevisionClearstatementPronounsubstitutionTopicsentenceAddmoredetailsLogicrelationshipQuotationCoherenceSpellingUnity
3、PunctuationConsistentperson/tenseExactlanguageSentencevarietyAddexamplesParallelismAvoidwordinessFormatTimeorder…思想品德七上下培训完整的原版绿带培训教材DMAIC各部分风扇调速旋钮注射模工艺结构分析及设计家纺企业集团全面创新发展战略咨询项目内部分析报告FeaturesofEffectiveSentences•1.Unityisthefirstqualityofaneffectivesentence.Aunifiedsentenceexpressesasinglecompl
4、etethought.E.g.:•Faulty:DuFuwasoneofthegreatestpoets.•Revised:DuFuwasoneofthegreatestpoetsoftheTangperiod.•2.Coherencemeansclearandreasonableconnectionbetweenparts.E.g.:•Faulty:Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.•Revised:Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobywhathedoes.思想品德七上下培训
5、完整的原版绿带培训教材DMAIC各部分风扇调速旋钮注射模工艺结构分析及设计家纺企业集团全面创新发展战略咨询项目内部分析报告FeaturesofEffectiveSentences•3.Conciseness:Asentenceshouldcontainnounnecessarywords.•4.Emphasis:Whenthereisanimportantidea,itshouldbeexpressedwithemphasis.•5.Varietyisessentialtogoodwriting.(short:long;simple:compoundandcomplex;statem
6、ent:question,commandorexclamation;periodic:loose…)思想品德七上下培训完整的原版绿带培训教材DMAIC各部分风扇调速旋钮注射模工艺结构分析及设计家纺企业集团全面创新发展战略咨询项目内部分析报告FeaturesofEffectiveSentences•6.Consistency:Allgoodwritingisconsistent.Thatis,eachsentenceandeachparagraphinthefinaldraftshouldmovealongsmoothly,withoutconfusingshiftsintense,n
7、umber,person,ordiscourse.E.g.:•Faulty:WestrolldownBourbonStreetasthejazzbandsbegantoplay.•Revised:WestrolleddownBourbonStreetasthejazzbandsbegantoplay.RevisionAfteryouhavetakenabreak,youcancriticizeandmakechangesonthefirstdraft.Yo
