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1、CollegeEnglishWritingNoteWriting(1)TeachingObjectivesTEM-4便条写作要求及类型请求便条邀请、约会便条抱怨、投诉便条一、便条的特点及要求我们首先从便条的定义出发,来看看便条的写作要求。便条是完成预约、道歉、邀请、请求、致谢、投诉等功能的简短的书信形式。那么书信和便条有什么区别呢?我们来看范文1(一封书信)和范文2(一则便条)的比较。范文1HeadingInsideaddress收信人地址Class0306ForeignLanguageCollegeZhejia
2、ngGongshangUniversity(Hangzhou,310012)September15,2004(President’sOfficeJiaogongRoad)DearPresidentHu:/,SalutationWearesophomoresmajoringinEnglishandaregreatlyhonoredtowritetoyou.Havingbeenlivingonthenewcampusforawholeyear,wehavehappilywitnessedthegreatchanges
3、here.Butsomethingstillneedsimproving.Whatcomesfirstisthedinningcondition.Thedisheshereremainthesamealltheyeararoundandwehavebeenfedupwiththem.Alsothepricesofthedishesareabithighandwefindthepriceshaverisenunreasonablythissemester.Furthermore,thedinninghallisno
4、tbigenoughtohold7000students.Itissocongestedatthepeakthatyounearlyturnoverthedishesofotherswhenyouturnaround.Worsemore,ifyoucomelate,therewillbenofoodleft.Thencomestheproblemofourlibrary.Frommypointofview,thenewlibraryisquiteexcellentasregardsitsscaleandstruc
5、ture.However,whatisdisappointingarethesheervolumeofbooksandthevarietyofmagazines.Manyofuscomplainthattherearenotenoughbooksforustochoosefrom.Althoughtheshelvesofthelibraryarespacious,itseemsthattherearenotenoughbookstofillthemup.Wearealllookingforwardtothesol
6、utionstotheseproblems.ComplimentarycloseSignatureOfficialcapacitySincerely,NancyMonitorofClass0306范文2Feb.11Richards,(DearProf.Richards,)I’msorryIcouldn’tmakeour4o’clockappointment.Prof.Sterne’slecturelastedalotlongerthanIexpected.Icouldmeetyouinthedepartmento
7、fficetomorrowat3p.m.,ifthatisconvenientforyou.Ifnot,pleaseleaveanoteinmymailbox,#529,tomorrowmorning.Thankyou.Sincerelyyours,ZhangHongyi1.便条特点1:构件“简单”书信由7个部分组成,它们分别是:Ø发信人信息(包括地址、邮编和写信时间);Ø收信人地址(为了使阅信人证实是收信人;如果彼此熟悉,这部分可以省略);Ø对收信人的称呼(后面的标点一般用逗号);Ø正文;Ø结尾客套语(后一定有
8、逗号);Ø签名(后面一定不能有标点符号);Ø职务名称(如果写信人不是以集体的名义写的则这部分不要)。而一个便条则相对简短,仅仅由时间、对方称呼、正文、结尾客套语和签名组成,当然如果便条是以集体的名义写的,则要添加职务名称。2.便条特点2:文体“适中”¸思考:仔细阅读上面两个范文,试着分析他们可能的文体差异。下面我们已经把他们的相应部分摘出,请你分析。书信Wearegrea