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1、观点对比类英语写作的反思及启示江西省萍乡市莲花中学贺艳花一、发现问题最近几年的高考英语试题中出现过许多观点对比类作文，高三学生在平时训练、考试中也写过各种话题的观点对比类作文。每次练习、考试后，老师都给出了范文，但学生总是写出一些汉式英语。下面是我从学生的作文中摘下的典型的错误句型。1、I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherwearefororagainstweshouldowncellphone.2、Therearesixtypercentsinfavorofcouldtakingcellpho
2、nesatschool,theythinkthathaveacellphonecankeepintouchwithothers.3、Otherpeoplewhoareinfavorof,don’tthinkso.4、Theotherpeoplethinkdon’ttakeacellphoneisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.5、Iagreewithpeopleshouldn’ttakecellphonetoschool.学生练得够多，但为什么还会写出这样的汉式英语呢？二、分析问题从批改学生的作文来看，学生屡犯错误的原因有以
3、下几方面：1、学生的英语基础差，对英语句子的基本结构没有概念，不会遣词造句。2、教师在讲解作文时，没有归纳观点类作文常见的简洁、地道的句子，学生在写作时没有地道的句子可运用，只有凭汉语思维去写作。3、教师没有引导学生去背优秀范文，积累写作模式。4、学生不会运用过渡词。三、解决问题的对策针对学生的英语水平，我采取以下教学策略：一﹚归纳●总结观点对比类作文写作模块（如下）I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherweshould…（主题）.Opinionsaredividedonthematter.Som
4、epeopleareinfavorof…(主题).Theythinkthat….Moreover,….Otherpeople,however,don’tthinkso.Theyarguethat….Furthermore,….Inmyopinion,everycoinhastwosides.Weshoulddealwiththethinginaproperway.●总结地道句型开头句：31、Wehavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherweshould….2、Thetopicof…isbecomingthemostpopularonerece
5、ntly.3、Whenaskedabout…,differentpeopleholddifferentviews.正方常用句子：1、Somepeoplesay…istheirfavorite.2、Somepeopleholdtheopinionthat…3、Manypeopleagreewiththisidea.反方常用句子：1、Whileothersfeel…isabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,….Secondly,….Thirdly,….2、Butsomepeopledon’tagreewiththemi
6、nseveralpoints.First,theybelievethat….What’smore,theysaythat….自己观点：1、Inmyopinion,Ilike…（哪方观点）.Thereasonisthat….2、Inaword,mypersonalviewemphasizeson…（采取对策）inascientificpoint.●总结过渡词1、表转折或对比关系：ononehand…ontheotherhand…, foronething…foranother…,but,while,yet,onthecontrary,comparedwith,inspite
7、of,instead.2、表递进关系：also,besides,furthermore,moreover,what’smore,inaddition,what’sworse,worsestill,tomakemattersthingsworse.3、表总括或结尾：inmyopinion,inaword,inshort,inbrief,onthewhole,inconclusion,tosumup.4、表列举理由的先后次序：firstly,secondly,thirdly;first,second,third;next,mea
