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1、第三单元作文基础写作之正反观点对立型你的班级对“是否有必要穿校服”进行了辩论,以下是正反两方所持观点。意见百分比原因赞同70%是学校的标志;整洁、大方;显示平等,避免攀比;节省时间,专注学习;不盲目赶时髦。不赞同30%颜色呆板沉闷;款式单一;不能满足时尚品位,不能彰显个性.[写作内容]根据以上内容,写一篇关于“学生是否有必要穿校服”的短文。•介绍正反两方观点;•表达自己的看法。[写作要求]•只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;•不要逐字逐句翻译所给信息。[评分标准]•句子结构准确,信息完整,篇章连贯。第一:认真审题•文体:观点对
2、立式议论文•人称:兼顾第一和第三人称•时态:现在时或者过去时理清写作结构:1.议论主题:是否有必要穿校服?2.赞成观点:支持穿校服理由(1)整洁、大方;显示平等,避免攀比。理由(2)节省时间,专注学习;不盲目赶时髦。3.反对观点:反对穿校服理由(1)颜色呆板沉闷;款式单一。理由(2)不能满足时尚品位,不能彰显个性。4.我的观点:支持/反对穿校服第二:整合信息(翻译关键词)•象征symbol•整洁大方tidyandneat•平等,避免攀比equal,avoidbeingcompared•节省时间,专注学习savetime,c
3、oncentrateonstudy•不赶时髦won’tfollowfashion颜色呆板沉闷dullandboringcolor款式单一simpleandplainstyle•缺乏个性lackpersonality•不能满足时尚品味can’tsatisfytasteforfashion第三:连词成句议论主题:是否有必要穿校服Wehadadiscussionabout/onwhetherit’snecessarytoweartheschooluniform./Recently,inourclasstherehasbeenah
4、eateddiscussionabout/onwhetherit’snecessarytoweartheschooluniform.赞成观点:理由1•Theschooluniformisasymboloftheschool.•Itistidyandneat.•Itmakesstudentsfeelequalandhelpsthemavoidbeingcomparedtoothersabouttheclothes.èTheschooluniform,whichistidyandneat,isasymboloftheschoo
5、l,makesthestudentsfeelequalandhelpsthemavoidbeingcomparedtoothersabouttheclothes.理由2:•Wearingtheschooluniformsavesthestudents’timeonchoosingwhattoweartoschool.•Itmakesthemconcentrateonstudy.•Theywon’tfollowfashion./Theyconsidertofollowfashionisunnecessary.èWearing
6、theschooluniformsavesthestudents’timeonchoosingwhattoweartoschool,andmakesthemconcentrateonstudyandconsidertofollowfashionisunnecessary.反对观点:理由1•Thecolorisdullandboring.•Thestyleissimpleandplain.èThecolorisdullandboring,andthestyleissimpleandplain./Thecolorisnoton
7、lydullandboring,butalsothestyleissimpleandplain./Apartfromthedullandboringcolor,thestyleissimpleandplain.理由2:•Itlackspersonality.•Itcan’tsatisfystudent’stasteforfashion.èItlackspersonality,soitcan’tsatisfystudent’stasteforfashion./Itcan’tsatisfystudents’tasteforfa
8、shionbecauseof/duetolackofpersonality.表达个人观点•Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned,itisnecessarytoweartheschooluniform./Personally,Iprefertotheweartheschoolun