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1、EssayTitleIntroParagraph·Majorclaim(thesisstatement)·Generaloverviewofwhat’stocomeBodyParagraph#1·MainIdea#1oSupportingDiscussion—Examples,details,explanationsBodyParagraph#2·MainIdea#2oSupportingDiscussion—Examples,details,explanationsConclusionParagraph·Summarizeandwrapitup
2、,leavethereaderwithsomethingtochewonWeworkedoncreatingtheseparagraphstogetherinclass.Foreachsampleparagraphbelow,westartedwithonestudent’sworkandthendidsomeeditingworktogether.*Remember:thesearenotfinishedparagraphs!*BodyParagraph#1:Oneofthereasonsthestateshouldchangetheirleg
3、alagefrom16to18forattendanceisbecausestudentswillearntheirhighschooldiploma.Themorethestudentsarerequiredtostayinschool,themoreeducationtheywillhave.Whenstudentshavetheirhighschooldiploma,theycangetabetterjob.Manyjobs,forexampleAldiFoods,requireahighschooldiplomaevenifyouwant
4、toworkasacashier.Studentswillhavemoreskillstogetajobtheylike.Also,studentscangotocollegeanytimetheywantsotheydon’thavetogobacktogettheirGED.Manydropoutsdon’tgobacktocollegebecausetheyfeelembarrassedthattheyhavetogobackandgettheirGEDatanolderage.Whentheygotocollegetheywillgeta
5、degreeinsomethingtheylike,forexamplecriminaljusticeiftheyliketofight.Studentswhohavediplomasaremostlikelytogotocollegeandgetabettereducation,thereforeraisingtheagefrom16to18isadecisionthatthestateshouldmake.Oneofthereasonsthestateshouldchangetheirlegalagefrom16to18forattendan
6、ceisbecausestudentswillearntheirhighschooldiploma.Themorethestudentsarerequiredtostayinschool,themoreeducationtheywillhave.Whenstudentshavetheirhighschooldiploma,theycangetabetterjob.Manyjobs,forexampleAldiFoods,requireahighschooldiplomaevenifyouwanttoworkasacashier.Studentsw
7、illhavemoreskillstogetajobtheylike.Also,studentscangotocollegeanytimetheywantsotheydon’thavetogobacktogettheirGED.Manydropoutsdon’tgobacktocollegebecausetheyfeelembarrassedthattheyhavetogobackandgettheirGEDatanolderage.(Thisisagreatexampleofdiscussionofideas.)Whentheygotocoll
8、egetheywillgetadegreeinsomethingtheylike,forexamplecriminaljusticeif
