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1、雅思写作G类攻略上海环球雅思俞伟国ChapterOneEssayWriting第一章.议论文完全攻略Argumentation三对一结构Somepeoplebelievethattomaintaintheculturalidentityofacity,thegovernmentshouldbuildallthenewbuildingsinatraditionalway.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2006.12.9)ProsConsCulturalidentityNoteconomica
2、lSafetyRisksHighercosts(Ef)(R)(E)(R)Introduction1.BackgroundInformation2.StatementSomepeoplebelievethatinordertopreserveculturalidentityofacity,allthenewbuildingshavetobeconstructedinaconventionalway.Personally,Idonotagreewiththeopinion.让步段:分析弱势分论点X1【1】:TopicSentenc
3、e【2】弱势分论点(Itcannotbedeniedthatthosewhoareoftheopiniondohaveapointtoacertainextent.)(Indeed,ifallthenewbuildingsinacityweretobeconstructedinatraditionalway,itcantrulyembodytheculturalidentityofthecity.)【3】Development(Effect)Asaconsequence,theenhancementofculturaliden
4、tityofacityinturnhelpsthecitytoattractmoretouristsandpotentiallyboostthelocaltourism.重点段:分析强势分论点X3【1】:TopicSentenceDespitethebenefit,problemsshouldnotbeneglected.【2】+【3】:MainIdea1+Development(Reason)Firstly,thepracticeisnoteconomicalcomparedwithmodernwaysofbuilding.
5、(Tobemorespecific,buildingsoftraditionalwaysaregenerallyshort.Thismeanstheydonothaveenoughspaceforsomanypeopletoliveinasmoderntallbuildingsdo.)Tobemorespecific,buildingsoftraditionalways,whicharegenerallyshort,donothavethecapacitytoholdasmanypeopleasmoderntallbuildi
6、ngsdo.【4】+【5】:强势分论点2+Development(CaseEvidencePreferred)(Secondly,thepracticeofteninvolvessafetyrisks.)(Forexample,inChina,traditionalbuildingsareoftenwoodenstructure,whichispronetofireorcollapse.)【6】+【7】:MainIdea3+Development(Reason)Finally,thecostsofconstructionten
7、dtobehigherifallthenewbuildingsinacityweretobebuiltwithtraditionalways.Thisisbecausemosttraditionalbuildingsarebuiltwithwoodandstone.Thismeansmoreskilledandexpensivecraftsmenhavetobehiredtobuildinsuchmaterial.Toconclude,thesuggestiontobuildallnewbuildingsinatraditio
8、nalwayisbeneficialtoenhanceacity’sculturalidentity.Thisonlybenefit,nevertheless,isimmediatelydwarfedbytheproblemsitislikelytobringabout.主体