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1、雅思写作G类攻略上海环球雅思俞伟国ChapterOneEssayWriting第一章.议论文完全攻略Argumentation三对一结构Somepeoplebelievethattomaintaintheculturalidentityofacity,thegovernmentshouldbuildallthenewbuildingsinatraditionalway.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2006.12.9)ProsConsCulturalidentityNoteconomicalSafetyRisksHigherco
2、sts(Ef)(R)(E)(R)Introduction1.BackgroundInformation2.StatementSomepeoplebelievethatinordertopreserveculturalidentityofacity,allthenewbuildingshavetobeconstructedinaconventionalway.Personally,Idonotagreewiththeopinion.让步段:分析弱势分论点X1【1】:TopicSentence【2】弱势分论点(Itcannotbedeniedthatthosewhoar
3、eoftheopiniondohaveapointtoacertainextent.)(Indeed,ifallthenewbuildingsinacityweretobeconstructedinatraditionalway,itcantrulyembodytheculturalidentityofthecity.)【3】Development(Effect)Asaconsequence,theenhancementofculturalidentityofacityinturnhelpsthecitytoattractmoretouristsandpotenti
4、allyboostthelocaltourism.重点段:分析强势分论点X3【1】:TopicSentenceDespitethebenefit,problemsshouldnotbeneglected.【2】+【3】:MainIdea1+Development(Reason)Firstly,thepracticeisnoteconomicalcomparedwithmodernwaysofbuilding.(Tobemorespecific,buildingsoftraditionalwaysaregenerallyshort.Thismeanstheydonot
5、haveenoughspaceforsomanypeopletoliveinasmoderntallbuildingsdo.)Tobemorespecific,buildingsoftraditionalways,whicharegenerallyshort,donothavethecapacitytoholdasmanypeopleasmoderntallbuildingsdo.【4】+【5】:强势分论点2+Development(CaseEvidencePreferred)(Secondly,thepracticeofteninvolvessafetyrisks
6、.)(Forexample,inChina,traditionalbuildingsareoftenwoodenstructure,whichispronetofireorcollapse.)【6】+【7】:MainIdea3+Development(Reason)Finally,thecostsofconstructiontendtobehigherifallthenewbuildingsinacityweretobebuiltwithtraditionalways.Thisisbecausemosttraditionalbuildingsarebuiltwith
7、woodandstone.Thismeansmoreskilledandexpensivecraftsmenhavetobehiredtobuildinsuchmaterial.Toconclude,thesuggestiontobuildallnewbuildingsinatraditionalwayisbeneficialtoenhanceacity’sculturalidentity.Thisonlybenefit,nevertheless,isimmediatelydwarfedbytheproblemsitislikelytobringabout.主体