生活在上海复旦 大学英语作文

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1、生活在上海复旦大学英语作文TheLifeinFudanFudanUniversityisclaimedtopositionthethirdinChina.GivenachancetostudyinFudanasanexchangestudentforonesemester,IcarriedmyluggageentandaspiredtohavingafruitfulsemesterinFudan.Butpus,Iyroom.Theroomissharedbysixstudents.Thetoiletisunbearablydirty,osqu

2、itoes,germsandbacteria.Themostunbelievablethingisthatallstudentsinahostelshareonebathroomandallofushavetoore,thereisnoaccesstotheInterandnotanyTVinourdormitory.Bythen,Irealizedhoplyconfusedabouttheent.IdoubtmyabilityofadaptationasIamthekindofstudents,bingtoandbeatenbydiffic

3、ulties.ButafterlivingyclassmatesafeproudthatIgraduallygetusedtothelifehereandconsiderthepoorenvironmentasachallengetome.Infact,nostudentsinthefacultyareimmunefromthekindoflifehere.Thoseecanlivehappilyhere,socanI.Theycanconcentrateontheirstudieshere,achinesandnoair-condition

4、ingsystem,butatleastIhaveelectricityandfanstostaycool;Ihaveforeachroom,IdifferentroomsintimesofostpreciouslessonIlearnfromstudentshereistheirattitudesofstudying.Theyaresodevotedandindustriousthattheygetupsoearlyinthemorning,queuingforaseatinthelibraryorstudyinginclassroomti

5、lllateatnight.Studentsaredeterminedtoachievetheirfar-sightedtarget,likecontinuingtheirstudiesaspostgraduates.Besides,thestudentsherepossessknoplyfocusingononespecificarea.Studyingandlivingisapricelessandinspiringlessontome,asurprisetomethatcausesmetotreasurethethingsIhave,e

6、vensomeminorthingssurethattheingyearmunefrom，succumbto等的使用就格外引人注目，因为这些地道的搭配和表达方式往往在大陆大学生作文中很难找到。另一方面，在文章中表达了自己的真实感受，比如使用shocked来描述自己初到新的生活环境的感受，又接连使用了两个so来表达自己对复旦学子的勤奋学习的无比钦佩，显得坦率而真诚。当然，段落清晰，结构分明，也是本文的一大优点。可能是出于个人写作风格，有点偏爱排比的修辞手段，但对同义词的排比如germsandbacteria，devotedandindustri

7、ous等最好适当控制，语言就更上一层楼了。