cet4真题作文-(手机的过度使用)--学生作文

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1、2013年12月大学英语四级考试真题(二)Part1writing(30minutes)Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheincreasinguseofthemobilephoneinpeople’slifeandexplaintheConsequenceofoverusingit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180w

2、ords.Peoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandusingwalkingsticksinordertosee.从批改网中选取的学生高分作文，希望同学们比较，鉴别，学习。ExcessivelyUtilizingCellPhonesAsisrevealedinthegraph,itisaplaintruththatpeoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandutilizingwalkingsticksinordertosee.Consequently,

3、thereisnodoubtthatthephenomenonarousespublicconcernregardingthisissue.Tosomeextent,itisanundeniablefactthatthecellphonesisindispensabletoourlivesandworks.Forinstance,itisnoexaggerationtosaythecellphonesundoubtedlyshortenthedistanceofcommunicationamongpeople.Onthecontrary,theissuethatpeoplep

4、lacemoreemphasisesonthecellphonesalsoexertsnegativeimpactsontheirlives.Ontheonehand,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatexcessivelyutilizingcellphonesisdetrimentaltotheeyesight.Ontheotherhand,excessivelyutilizingthecellphonesimposesrestrictionsondailylife,whichwillmakeuspourmoreattentionstoitins

5、teadofworking.Inmyhumbleopinion,itisabsolutelyessentialtotakemeasurestoalleviatethisissue.Undoubtedly,whatthemostcrucialthingweshouldbearinmindisthatadvantagesfaroutweighdisadvantages.Tosummarize,layingmoreemphasisesonthemeritsofthecellphoneswhichwillfacilitateyourlife.(196words)计算机田文雨90分(最

6、高分)批改网评语：作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开3Theincreasinguseofthemobilephoneinpeople’slifeFromthepicturewecanseethatPeoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandusingwalkingsticksinordertosee,whichgivesabigconcernanddiscussio

7、ninthesociety.Wecandrawaconclusionthatpeoplearesorelyontheirmobilephonethattheycannotleaveit.Agreatnumberoffactorscanaccountforthephenomenon,butthefollowingmaybetheessentialones.Firstofall,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,everyonecanpurchaseamobilephone.Itisw