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1、2013年12月大学英语四级考试真题(二)Part1writing(30minutes)Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheincreasinguseofthemobilephoneinpeople’slifeandexplaintheConsequenceofoverusingit.Youshouldwriteatl
2、east120wordsbutnomorethan180words.Peoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandusingwalkingsticksinordertosee.从批改网中选取的学生高分作文，希望同学们比较，鉴别，学习。ExcessivelyUtilizingCellPhonesAsisrevealedinthegraph,itisaplaintruththatpeoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircel
3、lphonesandutilizingwalkingsticksinordertosee.Consequently,thereisnodoubtthatthephenomenonarousespublicconcernregardingthisissue.Tosomeextent,itisanundeniablefactthatthecellphonesisindispensabletoourlivesandworks.Forinstance,itisnoexaggerationtosaythecellphonesun
4、doubtedlyshortenthedistanceofcommunicationamongpeople.Onthecontrary,theissuethatpeopleplacemoreemphasisesonthecellphonesalsoexertsnegativeimpactsontheirlives.Ontheonehand,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatexcessivelyutilizingcellphonesisdetrimentaltotheeyesight.Ont
5、heotherhand,excessivelyutilizingthecellphonesimposesrestrictionsondailylife,whichwillmakeuspourmoreattentionstoitinsteadofworking.Inmyhumbleopinion,itisabsolutelyessentialtotakemeasurestoalleviatethisissue.Undoubtedly,whatthemostcrucialthingweshouldbearinmindist
6、hatadvantagesfaroutweighdisadvantages.Tosummarize,layingmoreemphasisesonthemeritsofthecellphoneswhichwillfacilitateyourlife.(196words)计算机田文雨90分(最高分)批改网评语：作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开3Theincreasingus
7、eofthemobilephoneinpeople’slifeFromthepicturewecanseethatPeoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandusingwalkingsticksinordertosee,whichgivesabigconcernanddiscussioninthesociety.Wecandrawaconclusionthatpeoplearesorelyontheirmobilephonethattheycannotlea
8、veit.Agreatnumberoffactorscanaccountforthephenomenon,butthefollowingmaybetheessentialones.Firstofall,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,everyonecanpurchaseamobilephone.Itisw
