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1、一个值得纪念的日子Greatdaystoberememberedseldome,butsmallonessurroundusdaily.IdonothaveaRomanholiday,butIhaveanonsmokingdayinstead.Todayanc-smokingsigneasilyhooksupmyinterestingandreokingdayafeyfriends,volunteeredonacampaigntodiscouragepublicsmokingbypersuaclingpeopleinpublicpl
2、acestoextinguishtheircigarettesandputthecigaretteendsintoourmetalboxes.Andamemorialstickerbearingpatternsandeofthenonsmokingday.Thefirststepisneverafaststep.Afterhuntingforquiteaanbracingthephilosophyofnothingventured,nothinggained,monedupallourcourage,okeinpublicplace
3、s?Itisnoneofyourbusiness!aybesuchkindofsituationshouldcallforsomeotherpolicy.Imanagedasmile,blendedaybeflatteryshouldbevindicated,fortopleaseisagreatsteptoileisacurvethatsetseverythingstraight.Ouroothlyetiddleagedmanoreofasmokingaddictthanasmokingenthusiast.Nothingseem
4、edtobecapableofextinguishingthatcigarette.Eventheedtobepothecigarettesfilledmetalbox.oking.Butalle.Ithentriedtopeelthestubbornoniononelayeratatime.Ok,Iknookesmoreofyourcigarettethanyoudo!Infact,youareextinguishingonecelloflungcanceraybethatconstantdropsdoetoilingfor6ho
5、urs,invitingloadsoftroubles,collecting57cigarette-ends,savoringhundredsofpotentialsecondhandsmokersanddevelopingformyselfsomesenseofresponsibilitytoporarilylaiditdoateouractionsethesignificanceofcareandconsiderationforotherpeople.Sincethen,Ihavebeenascooperativeaspossi
6、bleaskedtoimprovemypublicbehaviorandIamalitbutbracingthephilosophyof‘nothingventured,nothinggained,,monedupa11ourcourage,...”;“Andlfurtherfoundoutthatforthisman,suchtedthehorizon,...”等等。但在第二个例子的描述上,有些地方叙述有待商榷,例如:“Infact,youareextinguishingonecellOflungcancerwhenyouexti
7、nguishyourcigarette.Youareextinguishingonecell“thediseaseOfselfishnesswhenyOUextinguishyourcigarette.”叙述重复,意思不很明朗。对此,似乎还可做进一步的修改。总体说来,出彩的文字运用使本文的可读性很强。
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