一个值得纪念的日子

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1、一个值得纪念的日子Greatdaystoberememberedseldome,butsmallonessurroundusdaily.IdonothaveaRomanholiday,butIhaveanonsmokingdayinstead.Todayanc-smokingsigneasilyhooksupmyinterestingandreokingdayafeyfriends,volunteeredonacampaigntodiscouragepublicsmokingbypersuaclingpeopleinpublicplacesto

2、extinguishtheircigarettesandputthecigaretteendsintoourmetalboxes.Andamemorialstickerbearingpatternsandeofthenonsmokingday.Thefirststepisneverafaststep.Afterhuntingforquiteaanbracingthephilosophyofnothingventured,nothinggained,monedupallourcourage,okeinpublicplaces?Itisnoneof

3、yourbusiness!aybesuchkindofsituationshouldcallforsomeotherpolicy.Imanagedasmile,blendedaybeflatteryshouldbevindicated,fortopleaseisagreatsteptoileisacurvethatsetseverythingstraight.Ouroothlyetiddleagedmanoreofasmokingaddictthanasmokingenthusiast.Nothingseemedtobecapableofext

4、inguishingthatcigarette.Eventheedtobepothecigarettesfilledmetalbox.oking.Butalle.Ithentriedtopeelthestubbornoniononelayeratatime.Ok,Iknookesmoreofyourcigarettethanyoudo!Infact,youareextinguishingonecelloflungcanceraybethatconstantdropsdoetoilingfor6hours,invitingloadsoftroub

5、les,collecting57cigarette-ends,savoringhundredsofpotentialsecondhandsmokersanddevelopingformyselfsomesenseofresponsibilitytoporarilylaiditdoateouractionsethesignificanceofcareandconsiderationforotherpeople.Sincethen,Ihavebeenascooperativeaspossibleaskedtoimprovemypublicbehav

6、iorandIamalitbutbracingthephilosophyof‘nothingventured，nothinggained，，monedupa11ourcourage，．．．”；“Andlfurtherfoundoutthatforthisman，suchtedthehorizon，．．．”等等。但在第二个例子的描述上，有些地方叙述有待商榷，例如：“Infact，youareextinguishingonecellOflungcancerwhenyouextinguishyourcigarette．Youareextinguish

7、ingonecell“thediseaseOfselfishnesswhenyOUextinguishyourcigarette．”叙述重复，意思不很明朗。对此，似乎还可做进一步的修改。总体说来，出彩的文字运用使本文的可读性很强。