流程图和地图题范

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1、IELTSWritingTask1:flowchartAflowchartisreallythesameasa processdiagram,butImightusetheterm'flowchart'whentheprocessisshownwithoutanypictures.Trywriting4paragraphsabouttheflowchartbelow.I'llwritesomethingfornextweek.Thechartbelowshowstheprocessofwastepaperrecycling.Theflowchartshowshowwas

2、tepaperisrecycled.Itisclearthattherearesixdistinctstagesinthisprocess,fromtheinitialcollectionofwastepapertotheeventualproductionofusablepaper.Atthefirststageinthepaperrecyclingprocess,wastepaperiscollectedeitherfrompaperbanks,wheremembersofthepublicleavetheirusedpaper,ordirectlyfrombusi

3、nesses.Thispaperisthensortedbyhandandseparatedaccordingtoitsgrade,withanypaperthatisnotsuitableforrecyclingbeingremoved.Next,thegradedpaperistransportedtoapapermill.Stagesfourandfiveoftheprocessbothinvolvecleaning.Thepaperiscleanedandpulped,andforeignobjectssuchasstaplesaretakenout.Follo

4、wingthis,allremnantsofinkandglueareremovedfromthepaperatthede-inkingstage.Finally,thepulpcanbeprocessedinapapermakingmachine,whichmakestheendproduct:usablepaper.IELTSWritingTask1:whywasitband9?TheessayIshared lastThursday wasgoodenoughforaband9,butwhy?Apartfrombeingwellorganisedandcoveri

5、ngallofthenecessarypoints,theessaycontainssomephrasesthatwouldensurehighvocabularyandgrammarscores:Vocabulary·therearesix distinct stages·fromthe initial collection...tothe eventual production·membersofthepublic·directlyfrombusinesses·separatedaccordingtoitsgrade·Stagesfourandfiveboth in

6、volve cleaning·foreignobjectsaretakenout·remnantsofinkandglue·theendproductGrammar·sixdistinctstages,from...to...(gooduseof'from-to'aftercomma)·wheremembersofthepublic...(inclusionofextrainformationbetweencommas)·Thispaper(useof'this'toreferbacktoanideaintheprevioussentence)·withanypaper

7、...being(useof with+ing toaddextrainformation)·cleaned,pulped,takenout,removed(useofpassiveverbformsinsteadofnounsshownonthediagram)·whichmakestheendproduct(useofrelativepronoun'which'toconnectideas)IELTSWritingTask1:processdiagramessayLastweekIsuggestedanessaystructurefo