抱怨便条---sampl

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1、Mar.15DearsirorMadam,（1）I'mwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemI'vehadwithinformationavailabilitywithyourproduct.Ihavebeen（2）tryingtogetapersononthephone,butIfailedbytryingseveraldepartments.（3）Ihopeyouwilladdressthisproblemtomysatisfaction,or（4）Iwillneverdobusines

2、swithyouagain.Iexpecttohearfromyousoon.Mytelephonenumberis0571-1234567.Thankyou.JohnSmith抱怨、投诉便条的写作除了基本的时间、称呼、结尾客套语、签名等四项必须的构件外，在其正文处一般还要有下面四项内容：(1)抱怨、投诉行为(2)抱怨、投诉内容的具体描述(3)要求弥补、纠正、赔偿(4)抱怨、投诉者对弥补、纠正、赔偿等的敦促或威胁。如果是礼貌的抱怨，则本部分不一定要有。例句：抱怨行为I’mwritingtoreporttheproblemswith

3、your…ØI’mwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemsIhavehadwithyour…ØI’mwritingtocomplainabout…ØI’msorry.Ican’tbearthenoiseanymore.具体描述引出Here’stheproblemI’vehad:要求弥补、纠正、赔偿Ihopeyoucanaddressthisproblemsoon.ØIhopeyouwilltakestepstorectifythissituationsoon.ØWouldyoupleaset

4、urnitdownalittle?ØItwouldbeverykind(considerate)ofyouto…对弥补、纠正、赔偿等的敦促或威胁Frankly,Iamnotwillingtoputupwiththesituationanymore.ØYoumustrectifythesituation,orIwilltakeittothecourt.ØIfyoucan’tgivemeasatisfactoryanswer,IwillcomplainittotheConsumerAssociation.范文赏析1：上星期天，你去买表

5、，服务员态度非常糟糕，给经理写一封投诉便条。Mar.15DearSirorMadam,IwenttoyourstoretobuyaTianxianwatchlastSunday.WhenIsaidthatthepricewashigh,theNo.5saleswomanrepliedinasarcastictone,“Youcangoaheadandbuyacheapfakefromotherstores.”Sheforgothowtotreataprospectivebuyer!Ihopeyoucanimproveyourser

6、vice,andgivemeaface-to-faceapology.Mytelephonenumberis010-12345678.JohnSmith范文赏析2：一年一度的高考在即，考生处在紧张的复习阶段，但周围工地轰隆隆的施工噪音总持续到半夜。假设你是居民委员会工作人员想和施工队领导反映情况，但领导不在，写张50-60左右的便条。Jun.15DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtobringyourattentiontothenoisefromyourconstructionsite.Itistimeforman

7、yhighschoolstudentstopreparefortheircollegeentranceexamination.Butyournoisyworkingalwayslaststillmidnight,whichhasdisturbedtheirstudyandinterferedintheirnormalrest.Therefore,itwouldbeveryconsiderateofyoutostopworkingbefore10o’clockatleastinthese10days.Heartfeltthanks.

8、Sincerelyyours,JohnSmithChairmanofQingyaResidentialCommittee