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1、短文改错TodayisWorldAIDSDay,andourschoolorganizedanactivitycalling“Takecare　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。　　删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起

2、）不计分。　　TodayisWorldAIDSDay,andourschoolorganizedanactivitycalling“Takecare　　ofourlives,handinhandwithAIDSchildren”.At8:30am,wethevolunteersgatheredat　　theschoolgatesandstartedourbiketrip.Ittookusaboutonehourandahalftogettingto　　theRedCrossHospital,whatmostAIDSchildrenarestaying.Soonafterwearriv

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