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1、DearEditor,Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.短文改错　　DearEditor,Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.Sheisourmonitorandoneof　　theexcellentstudentsinourclass.Cleverassheis,butshewordsveryhard.　　Wehavealotoncommonandhavealottotalk.Oneeveningshetoldme　　thatsomethinghappenedwhenhe

2、rparentswasout.Shewasdoingherhomeworks　　oneSundaymorningwhenshesmeltsomethingburning.Shestoppedlookout　　ofthewindowandfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbor’shouse.　　Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremencameandputoutfire.　　Herneighborwasverythankfulforherhelp.

3、　　Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.Sheisourmonitorandoneof　　theexcellentstudentsinourclass.Cleverassheis,butshewordsveryhard.　　Wehavealotoncommonandhavealottotalk.Oneeveningshetoldme　　thatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.Shewasdoingherhomeworks　　oneSundaymorningwhen

4、shesmeltsomethingburning.Shestoppedlookout　　ofthewindowandfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbor’shouse.　　Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremencameandputoutfire.　　Herneighborwasverythankfulforherhelp.　　IoftenquarrelaboutmymotheroverwhetherIcanwatchTVafterschoo

5、l.Sheholdsviewthatseniorthreestudentshavetomakefullyuseofeveryminutetoworkhardattheirlessons.ItseemstomethatonceIamallowedtodothat,I’llunabletocontrolmyselfandforgetallaboutmystudy.Shealsothinksitisbadformyeye.ButIreallycan’tacceptherideas.Inmyopinion,watchTVcansetmyminda

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