years ago, i received gift from my friend on my birthday 短文改错

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1、Yearsago,Ireceivedgiftfrommyfriendonmybirthday短文改错　　Yearsago,Ireceivedgiftfrommyfriendonmybirthdaywhowasnowlivingfaraway.Itdelightedmeonthesightofit.Itwasanartworkofpapercutting,aChinesetraditionalart.Withthegift,healsosentaletter,inthatheinformedmeofthathehadmadethepapercuttinghimself.Ittookhims

2、everalweektolearntomakeit.That’swhyhevalueitmorethananyothergiftsIreceivedthatday.Frankspeaking,itisstillhangingonthewallofmybedroom.WheneverIlookatit,Ican’thelpthinkofmyfriend.Howeverfarawayweare,wefeelcloselytoeachother.　　Yearsago,Ireceivedgiftfrommyfriendonmybirthdaywhonowlivingfaraway.Itdelig

3、htedmethesightofit.Itwasanartworkofpapercutting,aChinesetraditionalart.Withthegift,healsosentaletter,inheinformedmeofthathehadmadethepapercuttinghimself.Ittookhimseveraltolearntomakeit.That’swhyvalueitmorethananyothergiftsIreceivedthatday.speaking,itisstillhangingonthewallofmybedroom.WheneverIloo

4、katit,Ican’thelpofmyfriend.Howeverfarawayweare,wefeeltoeachother.　　第一处:gift前加a。gift是可数名词,且此处泛指”一个礼物”,故需加上不定冠词a。　　第二处:was→is。由时间状语”now”可知此处应用现在进行时。　　第三处:on→at。atthesightofsth.”看到,看见”,为固定搭配。　　第四处:that→which。分析句子结构可知,此处为”介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句,先行词是aletter,故用which。　　第五处:去掉that前的of。informsb.后可直接接that引导的从句。in

5、formsb.of后应接名词、代词或者动名词。故of多余。　　第六处:week→weeks。由句中的”several”可知应用名词的复数形式。　　第七处:he→I。本文是以第一人称来行文的,且由语境可知此处指那是我最为珍惜这一礼物的原因。故将he改为I。　　第八处:Frank→Frankly。franklyspeaking是习惯用法,意为”坦率地说”。　　第九处:think→thinking。can’thelpdoingsth.意为”禁不住做某事”;can’thelpdo意为”不能帮助做某事”。根据语境,此处应用thinking。　　第十处:closely→close。系动词后应用形容词

6、作表语,故用close。