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1、高分作文标志1:高考100词左右;四级120-150字;六级150—180字;2、是否长短句交叉;3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;写好一篇作文的注意事项1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomea
2、pplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。比如说:Otherindividuals,howe
3、ver,taketheattitudethat…3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)ComputerandIBySimmyIneverforgett
4、heexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworld
5、belongedtome.veryexcitingsb.beinterestedinsth.searchalotofThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoe
6、xaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!moreandmorepopular“与…一致With…development(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterintonowsb.beinterestedinsth.moreandmorepeopleThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型说某事是毫不夸张的Fora
7、start,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.Forastart替换TobeginwithWecan,freely,searc
8、h用了插入语的写作手法ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换Inaddition/BesidesDeliver替换sendThereisnodenyingthat,however,comp