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1、北京新航道郑庆利MScAppliedLinguisticsUniversityofOxfordPreparingyoutosucceed!十篇文章突破雅思写作HedginginacademicwritingPASSAGETWOSomepeoplebelievethatchildrenshouldbeallowedtostayathomeandplayuntiltheyaresixorsevenyearsold.Othersbelievethatitisimportantforyoungchildrentogotoschoolassoonaspossible.Whatd

2、oyouthinkaretheadvantagesofattendingschoolfromayoungage?FlowofideasWhilesomepeoplethinkthismaybedamaging…,infacttherearemanyadvantagestohavingschoolexperienceatayoungage.Firstly,achildwilllearntointeractwithalotofdifferentpeopleandsomechildrenlearntocommunicateveryearlybecauseofthis.Ano

3、theradvantageofgoingtoschoolatanearlyageisthatchildrendevelopfastersocially.Sooverall,Ibelievethat,attendingschoolfromayoungageisgoodformostchildren.Repetitionisasin???FlowofideasDOrepeat!DOrepeatstrategically!DOuserepetitionconstructively!P1:Inmanyplacestoday,childrenstartprimaryschool

4、ataroundtheageofsixorseven.However,becauseitismorelikelynowthatbothparentswork,thereislittleopportunityforchildrentostayintheirownhomeuptothatage.Instead,theywillprobablygotoanurseryschoolwhentheyaremuchyounger.P2Whilesomepeoplethinkthismaybedamagingtoachild’sdevelopmentortoachild’srela

5、tionshipwithhisorherparents,infacttherearemanyadvantagestohavingschoolexperienceatayoungage.如今，很多地方的小孩大概6、7岁开始上小学。但是，因为现在父母双方都工作的可能性越来越大，小孩很少有机会能一直呆在自己家里到这个年龄。他们可能很小就到托儿所去了。虽然有的人认为这样会对孩子的发展或孩子与父母的关系造成伤害，但其实比较小的时候上学好处很多。翻译但是现在，很可能父母双方都工作，小孩子很少有机会一直呆在家里。但其实比较小的时候上学好处很多。Itismorelikelythat…

6、Thereis…Ofcourse,travelingbyplaneproducesgreenhousegasesandisfuel-consuming.Butthemainsourceofworld’semissionsisprivatecarsratherthanairplanes.《就是要你过雅思写作6.5》p.204Ofcourse,thereisnodenyingthattravelingbyplaneproducesgreenhousegasesandisfuel-consuming.Butonefactshouldbemadeclearthatthemai

7、nsourceofworld’semissionsisprivatecarsratherthanairplanes.《就是要你过雅思写作6.5》p.204父母都在工作，没有时间来关心孩子。句型多样Bothparentsareworking,theydon'thavetimetocarefortheirchildren.Parentsarebothworkingandsotheydon'thavetimetocarefortheirchildren.Parentsarebothworkinganddon'thavetimetocarefortheirc