雅思写作-议论文部分满分范文分析

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1、雅思写作-议论文写作部分满分范文分析利用好剑桥系列中的范文，对提高写作的巨大帮助不言而喻。议论文部分包含两种题型：（1）Discussion/Report（2）ArgumentationDisccusion/Report:通常是对某一现象的原因，某一问题的解决方案及其影响的分析讨论。这类题目要求考生结合自己的已有知识，生活经验及对社会问题的见解展开充分的理由阐述。题目所占比例不及辩论类题目多。基本布局：                    Introduction-----介绍问题产生的背景(background)                        

2、            阐述问题的原因（causes/reasons）                  Body-----------  提出解决方案(solutions)                   Conclusion------总结body部分Therearemanyproblemswithstudents’behaviorinmanycountries.Whatarethecausesandwhatareyoursolutions?para1 Poorstudentbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespread

3、problemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.话题+概括原因para2 Inmanycountries,thebirthrateisdecreasingsothatfamiliesaresmallerwithfewerchildren.Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt,notintermsofloveandattentionbecauseworkingparentsdonothavethetimeforthis,butinmorematerialways.T

4、heyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywant,regardlessofprice,andtobehaveastheyplease.Thismeansthatthechildrengrowupwithoutconsiderationforothersandwithoutanyunderstandingofwheretheirstandardoflivingcomesfrom.本段写家庭方面的原因。Intermsof和regardlessof两个很棒的连接词，学会使用para3 Whentheygettoschoolagetheyhaveno

5、tlearntanyselfcontrolordiscipline.Theyhavelessrespectfortheirteachersandrefusetoobeyschoolrulesinthewaythattheirparentsdid.似乎可以合并到上一段 para4 Teacherscontinuallycomplainaboutthisproblemandmeasuresshouldbetakentocombatthesituation.ButIthinkthesolutiontotheproblemlieswiththefamilies,whone

6、edtobemoreawareofthefutureconsequencesofspoilingtheirchildren.Iftheycould4raisethemtobeconsiderateofothersandtobesocial,responsibleindividuals,thewholecommunitywouldbenefit.本段提出解决方案，依靠家庭教育。最后一句使用了虚拟语气。para5 Perhapsparentingclassesareneededtohelpthemtodothis,andhighqualitynurseryschool

7、scouldbeestablishedthatwouldsupportfamiliesmoreintermsofraisingthenextgeneration.Thegovernmentshouldfundthiskindofparentalsupport,becausethisisnolongeraproblemforindividualfamilies,butforsocietyasawhole.结尾段给出建议，办家长培训班，并且政府也要予以支持。提建议时，同样使用了虚拟语气。Argumentation:  通常以doyouagreeordisagree/d

8、iscus