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1、1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeff
2、ectively.2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。比如说:Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat… 3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等
3、等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenone'scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone'scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。 ComputerandI(BySimmy) Ineverforgetthe
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