]适当用被动替换主动

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1、1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeff

2、ectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…　　3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等

3、等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenone'scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone'scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)　　下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。　　ComputerandI(BySimmy)　　Ineverforgetthe

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7、ith…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…　　Advancement替换development　　Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto　　Current(currently)替换nowAppealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.　　Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople　　Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的　　Forastart,wecan,freel

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