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1、智课网TOEFL备考资料我的英文写作的经验举例分析考完托福,也有时间写点东西.想就英语写作方面谈点个人的心得体会.一、英语写作的特点.Thecharacteristicsofformalwriting1.名词化趋势Idonoteatmuch.-->Iamalighteater.Theclockonthedeskremindsmeoftime.-->Iputaclockonthedeskasareminderoftime.Weoncecried,laughedanddisappointed.-->Thereweremomentsoftears,momentsoflaughter,a
2、ndmomentsofdisappointment.注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词,目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.2.无灵主语(区别于被动语态)我们中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文则相反,习惯以物做主格.Moreandmoreyoungstudentsstudiedfurtherinthepasttwodecades.-->Thepasttwodecadeswitnessedagrowingnumberofyoungstudentsforfurtherstudy.Lookingoutofthewindow,youwillhaveanice
3、view.-->Aglanceoutofthewindowoffersyouaniceview.注意:名词化趋势和无灵主语常常是相结合的.3.被动语态这一点大家比较熟悉,不详细讲.比如:Greateffortsshouldbemadeto…..Whatcannotbedeniedisthat….二、句式的写作:MainfeaturesofEnglishsentences:1.长短句结合Loveispatientandkind.Itisneverjealous,boastful,proudorrude.Itkeepsnorecordofwrongthatothersdo.Italw
4、aysprotects,alwaysfruits,alwayshopes,andalwaysperseveres.Loveneverfails.一般来讲,总结性的句子应当使用短句,而说理的句子应用长句.2.并列复合句这种句子属于十分难写的句子,也举一个例子:Hewhowantstosavehislifewillloseit,andhewholoseshislifeformewillsaveit.3.单一复合句也就是我们常说的各种从句,不再举例.三、Varietyofsentences:1.”-ing&-ed”groupse.g.(1)Standingbytheriverside,
5、theMastersighed,”Maytimegoonandonlikethis,neverceasingdayandnight.”(2)Reviewingwhatonehaslearnedandgainingnewinsights,oneisfittobeateacher.(3)Comparedwiththetradition,modernityismoredynamic.2.”todo”groupse.g.Tospendtoomuchtimeinstudyissloth;tousethemtoomuchforornamentsisaffectation;tomakeanyj
6、udgmentwhollybytheirrulesisthehumorofthescholar.3.adverbSimply,amazingly,absurdly,broadly,practicallyandsoone.g.Intelligentlyappliedtodailylife,moderntechnologywillsurelybringbenefitstothewell-beingofthehumanrace.4.介词短语Inpursuitof,inspiteof(注意平时自己的收集)e.g.Inpursuitofexcellence,everpushingupthe
7、limit,lifeconsistsinthehopebornofdespair.5.主语从句e.g.WhatChinaneedsisnotmoremorals,butmoreprisonsforpoliticians.句子的变化还有Itisself-evident(adj)that…….和Therebe这样的句子6.倒装(1)将一些否定性含义的副词和短语在句首,用倒装会使句子生色不少.Neverbeforehassuchahighstandardbeenachieved.Har