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1、2011年6月英语四级真题与答案详解PartIWriting 标准版 DoingShoppingOnline WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingisnolongeratiringthing.Justclickyourmousetochoosethearticlesyoulike,andthepurchaseisdone.Youdon’tevenhavetostepoutoftheroom.Itseemsalleasyandquick. However,people’sopinionsvaryonthi
2、strend.Somebelievethatonlineshoppingistimeandmoneysaving.Withplentifulselectionoptions,theycanbuywhatevertheylikeatanytimeconvenient.Stillothersinsistthatmis-purchasingaloneisannoyingenough,nottomentionthecredibilityofthesellersandthesafetyoftheiraccounts. Inmyopinion,theconveni
3、enceandexcitementofonlineshoppingisbeyondalldoubts.Inthemeantime,wemustalwaysbearinmindthatcertaintrapsdoexist,sowe’dbettermakesurethesellersaretrustworthybeforebuying.Inaddition,weshouldalsoguardourselvesfromthepotentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation. 文章点评： 这是一篇“中等偏
4、上”的学生作文。本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇；接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比；最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，用语较为地道。 下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处： 1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。但是，以“WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。 2.微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如Withplentifulselectionoptions…简化成W
5、ithplentifulselections…更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多； 高分版 Withthehelpoftheeverrapiddevelopmentofinternettechnology,onlineshoppingiscomingintofashioninmostofcities. Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetovariousreasons.Fromtheperspectiveofconsumer,itcansavesometimeforpeoplewhodon’tha
6、vemuchsparetime.Justclickthemouse,theycangetwhatevertheywantwhilestayingathome.Fortheretailers,itcancutsomecostsforthosewhodon’thavemuchcirculatingfunds.Theydon’thavetorentahouseandspendmoneyonemployeescomparedwiththetraditionaltrademode.However,therearestillsomedefectsinonlinesh
7、opping.First,laceoffacetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.Second,peoplewilllosethefunofbargain. Itisundeniablethatshoppingontheinternethasbecomeanirresistibletrendinmodernsociety.It’sofgreaturgencythatweneedtoregulatetherelativelawsaccordancewiththerapidgrow
8、thofonlineshopping.Onlyinthiswaycanweenj
