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1、2010高考作文讲评学案Part1Analysisofthehomework开头：（已给出）第一幅图1.OnSaturday,IsearchedforthetrainticketaboutBeidaihe.Mygrandparentsaroundmeandaskedtheweatherandthehotel.andthenIwenttobuytheticketsforthem.2.IsearchedtheinformationsaboutBeidaiheontheInternetincludingthetraintick,h
2、otelandwhether.3.OnSaturdaymorning,Igotupveryearly.Afterbreakfast,IsurfedtheInternetwithmygrandparents.Wewantedtosearchforsomeinformationaboutthetrainticket,thehotelandtheweatherinBeidaihe.(王天元)第二幅图1.ThenIhelpedthemtobuytwotraintickets.2.Onthenextday,Iwenttotrainti
3、cketofficeonmyowntobuytwotickets.TherewerealotofpeoplebuytheticketstoBeidaihe.3.Butthereweresomanypeople,Ispendnearly3hourstobuyithardly.4.Afterdoingthat,Iwenttothetrainstationinordertobuythenextday’stickets.TherewassomanypeoplethatIhadtospendlotsoftimewaiting,butl
4、uckilyIsucceededtobuytwotickets.（邱昊阳）第三幅图1.IhelpedtheirpreparedtheclothandthemapaboutBeidaiheandtwosunglasses.Mygrandmagavemeabottleofwaterandletedmehavearest.2.…DuetothesunshineinBeidaihewasreallystrong,Ipreparedtwosunglassesforthem.3.AssoonasIgothome,Ihelpedmygra
5、ndparentstopreparetheusefulthingswhichmustbetakenwiththem.Includingclothes,shoes,umbrellaandthemapofBeidaihe.Themostimportantthingweresunnyglassedbecausethesunshinewastooheavily.（肖强）4.Ihelpedthempreparetheirluggage,suchassunglasses,umbrella.IalsotookamapofBeidaihes
6、othattheycouldknowhowtogettothehotelwhichwebooked,alsotheycouldgotosomeinterestingplaces.(孙晓晴)第四幅图1.Thenextmorning,Isentthemtothestationandsaidgoodbyetothem.Theysatinthetrainwithsmileandgrateful.2.…wesaid“goodbye”toeachotherthroughthewindow.Andthen,thetrainsetout.3
7、.Thenextday,theystartedtheirtriptoBeidaihe.Isaidgoodbyetotheminthestationwiththehopethattheycouldhaveagoodtimethere.（郭宇）结尾1.MygrandparentswereproudofmebecauseIdidsomanythingsforthem.Iwasproudofmyself,too.（陈莹）2.IamveryexcitedtopreparetheirtriptoBeidaihe.Ithelpsmedev
8、elopmyabilities.IamnotachildanymoreandIshoulddomorethingsformygrandparents.Ilovethem.（王贺）Part2参考样文Lastweekend,Ihelpedmygrandparentspreparetheirtr
