高考英语专题—书面表达(二)

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1、2011年高考英语专题—书面表达(二)第二部分开放作文一、请阅读下面两篇范文，根据所给评分标准分别打分，并进行简单点评。第二节开放作文（15分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.请填写以下评分表，打出此篇作文的分数：Sample1Sample2Sample3

2、Sample4ArgumentMeritsScore[Sample1]Ascanbeseeninthepicture,aboywearingglassesisfishingwhilereadingabook.Thebooktellshimthatfishcannotlivewithoutwater.Thisistruebutheboy’sbehaviorisridiculous:heisfishinginawell.Whydoestheboymakesuchamistake?Becausehemisunders

3、toodwhatthebooksays.Thatfishcan’tlivewithoutwaterisright,butitdoesn’tmeanwherethereiswatertheremustlivefish.Thereisnofishinawell.Whenwereadabook,weneedtogettherightcomprehensiontoit.Wecannotmisunderstandwhatthebookmeans,orwemightdosomethingstrangejustlikethe

4、boy.Sometimesthemistakecanbedangerous.Wecannotloseourcommonsense,either.[Sample2]Aswecanseeinthisfunnypicture,aknowledgeable-likemanwithapairofglassesisfixinghiseyesonanencyclopediawhichsays“Fishcannotlivewithoutwater.”Meanwhile,heisfishinginthewaterofawell!

5、Itisobviousthathecangetnothingfromthewell.Thispictureindicatesahigh-profilephenomenoninthecontemporarysociety.Somepeoplearewelleducatedandhavealotofknowledgeasthey’vereadmanybooks.However,theyonlybelieveinthatknowledgefirmlyyetneverthinkaboutinwhatsituationc

6、antheknowledgeheused.Theyconsiderthosethingsinbooksonlyasknowledgeandisolatethemfrompracticeandreallives.Sowhenitcomestousingtheminlives,thesepeoplewillalwaysbecomeconfusedduetolackofflexibilityanddepthinperception,anddosillythingslikethemanfishinginthewell.

7、Frommyperspective,thepurposeoflearningistouseit.Sowhenwelean,wearesupposedtocombine8knowledgewithreality.Fishcannotliveinallkindsofwaterandknowledgeisnotsuitableforeverysituation.Onlywhenwethinkabouthowtousewhatwe’velearnedcarefullycanwemakethebestuseofthem!

8、[Sample3]Asisshowninthepicture,amanwearsapairofglassesisreadingthebookwhole-heartedlywhileheisfishinginawell.Thebookhereadtellshimthatfishcan’tlivewithoutwater.Frommyperspective,Ithinkthepicture