雅思写作大作文精准定位(四段式)

雅思写作大作文精准定位(四段式)

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1、雅思写作大作文核心技法系列一——南京新航道胡义祥雅思写作大作文精准定位(四段式)胡义祥笔者注:只要考生写作时不偏题,词汇使用恰当,运用精准定位四段式或者五段式,大作文得分6.5分左右。例文题目来源于网络,可能与真题有出入。本例文(一稿未修改)写作花费时间为1小时,与考场作文稍有区别,旨在讲解雅思写作精准定位法。Ielts2008-12-20task2Now,alotofcharitiesandorganisationshavetopublicizetheiractivitiesandsetupanumberofdaystonamethespecialday,likeInternati

2、onalChildren'sDay,InternationalNon-smokingDay.Whydotheydoso,and whattheeffectwillbe?Charitiesandorganisationshelpthosewhocareforothersbringtheirwishesandaidtopeoplewhoareinneed.Manyorganisationsofthiskindholdpublicactivitiesandsetupseveraldaysinayeartonamethem,likenationalchildren`sdayandnation

3、alnon-smokingday.Themeaningofthis,inmyopinion,hastwofolds.Firstly,bysettingupaspecialday,anorganizationcanbetterpromoteaspecificactivity,thusmorepeoplewouldknowwhatitistryingtotellthemandtheirperceptionofcaringandsocialresponsibilitywouldbefurtherwoken.Forexample,inchina,Marchthe15thisaspeciald

4、ayforpromotingconsumers`rights.Everyyearonthatday,therewillbelotsofactivitiesheldandconsumers`rightsarebeingpaidgreatattentionto.Asaresult,everyoneinchinabecomesmoreawareoftheirownrightsasapurchaser.Secondly,aparticulardayofoneyearcanmakeaspecificpurposeofficial,whichencouragsthepublictocarryon

5、theduty.Unlikethoseactivitiesthatareonlyheldonceandpeoplebegintoforgetwhattheyareforshortlyafternomorepromotionismade,thosethatareheldregularlyeveryearcanbewellrecognizedandpeoplearemorelikelytocontinuedoingwhattheyhavedone.Forinstance,nationalnon-smokingdayisagoodideatomakethepublicbeawareofth

6、eharmthatsmokingdoestothem,which,obviously,needstobeconstantlycared.Tosumup,charitiesandorganisationssettingupmanydaysofayearcanbothstrengthenpeople`sconsciousnessandmakepeoplefulfilltheirdutiesinthelongterm.(275)雅思写作大作文核心技法系列一——南京新航道胡义祥例文分析以及四段式精准定位Overall:275sentencewordsWords/paraENWENSIntro

7、duction1stS20575032ndS273rdS102ndpara1stS3991905-62ndS153rdS214thS163rdpara1stS2299905-62ndS473rdS30conclusion1stS2828402-3注:相对复杂句子字数>总字数/总句数如果长句子不太好把握,推荐不要写过长的句子(比如字数在30以上的句子)

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