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1、初三作文讲义系列新王牌作文中考英语写作技巧静安初中培训机构新王牌角色大反转——我当老师评作文作文点评体验：我评我优秀！找回更加优秀的自己！BYZhangChenWhat’syourviewonsettingofffirecrackersIt’satraditionactivityfor the ChinesetosetofffirecrackersonNew Year’seve.EverytimeIamexcitinged toseethebeautifulfirecrackers. Soas the

2、lasttime. [Icouldn’tconcealmyexcitementatthesightofthebeautifulfirecrackers.] However,moreandmorepeople are againstsettingofffirecrackersbecauseoftheseriousairpollution.Itcausesmanyhealthproblemandpeoplehavetowearbreathingmaskwhentheygoout.Iagreewiththe

3、m.Althoughfirecrackersarecharming, [Comparedwiththecharmingfirecrackers,] theenvironmentismoreimportanttous.Ihopethegovernmentmustmakesomerulesaboutsettingofffirecrackers assoonaspossible.Wemayalsofindwaystocreateenvironmentally friendly firecrackers.文章

4、条理比较清晰，结尾的提议很好。部分句子表达有误，要作修改。ByZhangAoWhat’sYourViewonSettingoffFirecrackersSettingofffirecrackers—oneofthemostfamousChinesetraditionalcustoms,alwaysbringsmelotsof marvelous memorieswhentheSpringFestivaliscoming. AsfarasIamconcerned, althoughitisnoisyto

5、setofffirecrackers,thesoundstillmakesmehappyandexcited. [Despitethenoise,thesoundofthefirecrakersgivesusagreatdealofexcitementandhappiness.] Butinmyopinion,nowadays,setting offfirecrackers isharmfulto theenvironmentasitwill release plentyofcarbon15初三作文讲

6、义系列新王牌dioxideandothergaswhich doharmto theatmosphereandmaketheairpollutionmoreandmoreserious. [worsentheairpollution.] Ihopewecanfinda‘green’way to celebratetheSpringFestivalbecausewehaveonlyoneearth.(103words)内容很详细，既有自己认同的方面，也提出了存在的问题，最后给出的建议也与环保话题息息相关

7、。句式丰富，但还可以作些调整让句子表达更地道。ByWuJiaxinWhat’sYourViewonSettingoffFirecrackersIt’scommonknowledgethat firecrackersare indispensable inSpringFestival,lastyearwas noexception.Inmyopinion,thisChinesecustomcanbringmealotofhappiness.However,thiscustomstillhassomedi

8、sadvantages. Firstandforemost, ifwesetofftoomanyfirecrackers,theenvironmentwillbepollutedsothatwecan’tbreathefreshair. Moreover, some peoplearesettingofffirecrackers while others aresleeping.It’s reallymakespeoplenervous. Lastbut