安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2020届高考英语 考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作外教旁批写作 (6)

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1、安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2020届高考英语考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作（七）典例请根据以下要点，适当发挥，写一篇不少于120词的英语说明文。标题：ShoppingontheInternet(网上购物)要点：1.网上购物已很普遍；2.网上购物的好处；3.网上购物的缺点。【写作策略】1.仔细审题：(1)体裁：提纲式作文(2)时态：一般现在时(3)人称：第三人称。2.确定结构：(1)概括网上购物现状—普遍。(2)文章主体:——网上购物的好处与缺点。3.筛选词汇：(shopping，advantages，ontheInternet，withthedevel

2、opmentof等)4.句型搜索：(Alltheyneedtodois...；Thefirst...isthat...等。)5.组句成篇：(常用Thefirst，thesecond等。)【范文赏析】ShoppingontheInternet①WiththedevelopmentoftheInternetandthepopularizationofcomputers，shoppingontheInternethasbecomemoreandmorecommoninourdailylife.ShoppingontheInternethasaloto

3、fadvantages，②ofwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.③Peopledon’thavetowastealotoftheirenergyandprecioustimetogofromoneshoptoanothertochoosethecommoditiestheylike.Thisisespeciallydesirabletotheold，thesickandthebusypeoplewhocannotgototheshopsinperson.④Alltheyneedtodois

4、tositinfrontofthecomputerandclickthemouse.⑤Thegoodstheyorderwillbedeliveredtothemimmediately.⑥However，shoppingontheInternetalsohasitsdisadvantages.⑦Thefirstdisadvantageisthattheconsumerscannotseethegoodsortrythemoninperson.Sometimes，therealgoodsmaynotbethesameaswhathavebeens

5、eenonthecomputer.⑧TheseconddisadvantageisthatsomeshopsontheInternetarenotregistered.Theywillneverdeliveranythingtoyouaftertheygetthemoneyfromyou.Oncecheated，youwillfindthatyouhavenowheretogotocomplain.【名师点评】★①开篇引出话题，比较级的叠用表明网上购物的发展趋势。★②非限制性定语从句，增强句与句之间的连贯性。★④⑤强调进一步网上购物方便的特点。

6、★⑥从内容上转折，过渡到论述网上购物的缺点。★⑦⑧分别论述网购的缺点。★总体评价：文章结构清晰，层次分明，内容丰富真实。最后，若再加总结性语言，则文章更加完美。【写作指导】Elegance(优雅)(原文)Soso(普通)(1)ShoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages，ofwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.ShoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantagesandoneofthemisperhapsitsconvenienc

7、e.(2)Thisisespeciallydesirabletotheold，thes