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1、II.CommonErrors1ⅠRun-onSentences(串句)串句是在没有连接词或标点符号的情况下,将两个独立的单句串在一起。“逗号割裂”-----逗号不可以连接两个独立的句子;句号和分号可以。Example:Theexamwaspostponed,theclasswascanceledaswell.ThreeWaystoAvoidRun-onSentencesPeriodandaCapitalLetter(句号+大写)Commaandajoiningword(逗号+连接词)Semicolon(分号)例句:
2、Theexamwaspostponed.Theclasswascanceledaswell.(句号+大写)Theexamwaspostponed,andtheclasswascanceledaswell.(逗号+连接词)Theexamwaspostponed;theclasswascanceledaswell.(分号)2ⅡFragmentarySentences(破句)有些所谓的句子,或无主语,或无谓语动词。仅仅是单词的堆砌,无法表达一个完整的意思。从属连词引起的破句(从属连词引导的从句不能单独成一个句子)Which
3、isagoodthing.-----破句改正方法:增加主句;删除连接词Hetoldmeastorywhichisagoodthing.Itisagoodthing.3ⅡFragmentarySentences(破句)-ing分词和不定式引起的破句Heworkstenhoursaday.Thengoingtoclassfortwohours.改正方法:添加主语,把-ing变为动词的正确形式;being改为beHeworkstenhoursaday.Hegoestoclassfortwohours.Heworksfort
4、enhoursadayandthengoestoclassfortwohours.增加细节引起的破句由于增加一些由forexample,suchas,including等细节引起的破句缺少主语或是谓语动词。Oneofmygreatestjoysinlifeiseatingdesserts.Suchascakeoricecream.改正方法:把破句与前边具有完整意义的句子连接起来;为破句增加主语或谓语动词。Oneofmygreatestjoysinlifeiseatingdesserts,suchascakeorice
5、cream.缺少主语的破句改正方法:把破句与前句相连;增加适当主语。Hewenttotherefrigeratortogetmilk.Anddiscoverednomilkleft.Hewenttotherefrigeratortogetmilkanddiscoverednomilkleft.4Exercise:p365ⅢFaultyParallelism(FaultyCoordination错误平行结构)平行结构是把两个或两个以上意思并列的成分用同等的语法形式来表达。反之则为错误平行结构。Astudentneed
6、sbooks,notebooks,andheneedspens.Astudentneedsbooks,notebooksandpens.改正错用的并列连词Andwhoandwhich应尽量避免使用;除非前面已经出现由whowhich引导的从句。eg.Tom,awiseboy,andwhoismyfriend,isfromU.K.Tom,whoisawiseboy,andwhoismyfriend,isfromU.K.Tom,awiseboyandmyfriend,isfromU.K.6ⅢFaultyParalleli
7、sm(错误平行结构多项平行把一组词连续的排列起来,使意思和结构保持平行。Whenwearrivedhome,weunpackedoursuitcases,tookshowers,andthenwewenttosleepaftereatinglunch,Whenwearrivedhome,weunpackedoursuitcases,tookshowers,ateourlunch,andwenttosleep.注意错误的省略在平行结构中省略关键词,会使搭配不当,句义模糊。检验方法:将动词与助动词分别搭配,若时态有误,该
8、平行结构便不成立。Healwayshasandalwayswillcompeteforthehighesthonor.Hehasalwayscompetedandwillalwayscompeteforthehighesthonor.用thanas引出的比较要保持逻辑通顺,语法无误MyleaningisasmuchasPaul.Mylearni