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1、Unit81)usingnon-finites;2)usingreplacementofattributes;3)usingadverbs;4)usingnouns;5)usingadjectives;6)usingprepositionalphrases;7)usingellipticalforms;8)usingtechnicalterms;9)usingcontractedwords;and10)deletingredundantexpressions・Let9sdealwiththemonebyonewithcomparativeexamples・1)Us

2、ingNon-tlnitesAfullsentence:InadditiontobankloanintheEurodollarmarket,BellSouthcanconsiderthatthecompanyusesadomesticloan.Aconcisesentence:InadditiontobankloanintheEurodollarmarket,BellSouthcanconsiderusingadomesticloan.(gerund)Afullsentence:Theresearchthatisnowbeingcarriedoutintheare

3、aisextensiveandmeaningful.Aconcisesentence:Theresearchnowbeingcarriedoutintheareaisextensiveandmeaningful,(participialphrase)Afullsentence:Ifyoulookcarefully,youwilldiscoverevenmorewaystoshortenthesentenceswithoutchangingtheirmeaning.Aconcisesentence:Lookingcarefully,youwilldiscoverev

4、enmorewaystoshortenthesentenceswithoutchangingtheirmeaning,(participialphrase)Afullsentence:Inourexperiment,weusedanumberofprobes.Thereasonforthatwastoeliminatetheproblemsanderrorsassociatedwithwetchemicalanalysis.Aconcisesentence:Inourexperiment,weusedanumberofprobessoastoeliminateth

5、eproblemsandenorsassociatedwithwetchemicalanalysis,(infinitivephrase)Afullsentence:Theclassification/predictionphaseisresponsiblefordeterminingtheactionstobeperformedonnewdocuments・Aconcisesentence:Theclassification/predictionphasedetermineshowtoprocessnewdocuments,(infinitivephrase)2

6、)UsingReplacementofAttributesAfullsentence:Theprecisionoftheexperimentwasaffectedbythenoiseoftheenginenearby.Aconcisesentence:Theexperimentalprecisionwasaffectedbythenearbyenginenoise・Afullsentence:thetransmissionofthedataofthenetwork3）UsingAdverbsAfullsentence:Itisadmittedthatourinst

7、ituteisoneofthelargestfusionresearchcentersinChina.Aconcisesentence:OurinstituteisadmittedlyoneofthelargestfusionresearchcentersinChina.RefIectionsandPractice（2）Makeeachofthefollowingsentencesmoreconcisewithoutchangingtheirmeanings.1.AfterwehavecardedthroughtheformalismofLagrangemulti

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