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1、welcome书面表达写作技巧Skillsforwrittenwork词汇,句型(高级)和语法多样化(较复杂)1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑4.语言得体要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章?语言地道,规范acompositionabeginningparagraph(usuallywithatopicsentence(起始段)bodyparagraphs(正文段)aconcludingparagraph(结尾段)过渡词:first,second,finally,also,but,h
2、owever,onthecontrary,what’smore..,besides,inadditionfurthermore,etc.Writingacompositionisjustlikemakingasandwich.不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首。e.g.Theboyistiredandhungryandhurriedhome.Tiredandhungry,theboyhurriedhome.改变句子的开头方式(Changeofthebeginningofasentence)把其中一句
3、改为分词短语Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.Havingfinishedsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.二.写作中的句型转换(Transformationofsentencesinwriting)A.合并为简单句2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.Hewasbroughtinwithhishandstiedbehindhisback.TheChineseartistsweretope
4、rformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.B.合并为复合句2Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Thismakespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,
5、whichmakespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.1.把从句改为分词短语Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.Havingfinishedherstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.2.把从句改为介词短语Hewentoutthoughitwasraining.Hewentoutinspiteoftherain.C.把复合句改为简单句倒装句强调句主从复合句分词状语With复合结构三.整篇文章中,避免只
6、用一两个句式,要灵活运用以下结构(Useasmanyofthefollowingstructuresaspossible)1.Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.(先用倒装句改写再用介词短语改写)Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.2.Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.(先用强调句型改再用倒装句改)Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidheg
7、etup.3.Thedriverspedupandotherdriversfollowedhim.(用分词短语改)Thedriverspedup,followedbyotherdrivers.4.Theboysleptwhilethelightwason.(用with复合结构改)Theboysleptwiththelighton.1.Ihadagoodidea.(先用agoodidea做主语改而后仍用I主语用高级词组替代had改)Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.Icameupwithagoodidea.
8、四.注意使用高级词汇、习语谚语以增加文采。(Trytouseadvancedwordsoridioms)2.Ihaverunoutofmoneyandcan’tbu