新高考作文讲评课课件.ppt

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1、writingForClass16,SeniorThreeSixstepsforthewritingpractice:HowtogetonwithourparentsStep1:examinethetopicStyle:______________________________________tense:______________person:_______________Paragraphs:Paragraph1:Paragraph2:Paragraph3:议论文（ArgumentativeWriting）pr

2、esentfirstthecommonproblem:parentscareforeverythinghowparentscareforeverythignofusthewaytosolvetheproblemStep2:listthemainpointsthesameproblemcareforeverythingmakethegenerationgapdeeperworryabouteverythingmakeusgrowuphealthilyandlivehappilymoreunderstandingbetw

3、een…Step3:makesomesentences:Wehavethesameproblem.Ourparentscareforeverythingofus.Theyalwaystelluswhatweshoulddo.Theydonotletusdowhatweliketodo.Thegenerationgapisdeeper.Thepurposeistomakeusgrowhealthilyandhappily.Wearepartoftheirlife.Wecarrytheirhopeandexpectati

4、on.Weshouldunderstandeachother.Inthisway,wecangetonwellwitheachother.Step4&5:connectthesentencesandmakesomeappolishment.Step6:Copyitoutcarefullyandclearly.Proofreading(findout5errors)Ourparentsconcernabouteverythingthatwehavedone,whichmakeusannoyed.Theyalwayswo

5、rryabouteverythingandeverybody,suchasourstudy,entertainmentandfriends.Asisoftenthecase,theysometimeslookourdiarywithoutourpermit.“It’sgoodforyou.”explaintheyeverytimeweaskthemwhy.Childrenasweare,therearesomebasicpersonalrights,whichshouldbeprotected.Howtogetonw

6、ellwithourparents?It’saproblem.However,thereisnoreasonforustobeagainsttoourparentsjustbecauseofit.Onlywhenwetryourbesttocommunicatewiththemcanwemakeeachofusunderstand.It’syoursincerityandpatiencecancalltheirrespectonyou.Whynothaveatry?_______makes_____read_____

7、______permission＼∧thatSuggestionsformakingourwritingoutstanding:advancedwordsandphrases;differentabundantsentencepatterns;correctconjunctions.Somecopiesfromourhomework:Copy1:Itseemsthatourparentscaretoomuchaboutus.Forexample,theyaretellinguswhatweshoulddoandwha

8、twemustn’tdoallthetimeandtheyalsoworryaboutallthatwedo.Inordertokeepusgrowinghealthilyandhappily,theyevenwantustostayathomeforawholedayatweekendsifpossible.However,wefeelitd