增强书面表达的技巧.ppt

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1、EnglishWriting增强书面表达效果的技巧HowtowriteanimpressivepassageShizhuangseniorhighschoolMs.Guo一、比较下面两篇书面表达AWemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsandexams.Wehaveexperiencedsuccessaswellasfailure.Consideringcarefully,Ithinkwhatmattersisnottheoutcome,buttheattitudestowardstexts,whichhaveagreatinfluenceoni

2、t.Themajorityofstudentsbehavepositivelythoughtheyfailed.Thereisnodoubtthatmanyfactorscontributetotheresult.Therefore,theyanalyzethecausesandpolishuptheirstudyskillssothattheycanbuildupconfidence.Besides,theyvaluecorrectingthemistakestheymadeverymuch,whichwillhelpthemachievesuccessinthenextexam

3、ination.However,therearesomestudentsshowtheoppositeattitude.Theybecomeupsetandlackofconfidencebecauseoftheshock.Theycan’tcomeupwithasolutiontotheproblem,onlywaitforothers,takingnoefforts.Itisobviouslythattheycan’tachievesuccessanymoreduetolackofworkinghard.AsfarasI’mconcerned,undernocircumstan

4、cescanweloseourconfidence.Aswearemiddleschoolstudents,weshoulduseourintelligencetodealwithit.wecan’tgiveupbeforehavingatry.Asanoldsayinggoes,“wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”.BWemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsandexams.Notonlydidwehavesuccessfulexperiences,butalsohavefailed.Facingfailureoft

5、ests,differentpeopleholddifferentopinion.Afewpeoplehaveanegativefeelingtowardit.sotheylosethepositiveattitude.Theydon’tworkhardanymore.Itcausesagreatinfluenceonthemwhohaveanegativefeeling.Butmostofpeoplepossessacorrectattitude.Theyusuallyanalyzewhytheydon’thaveasuccess.Andtheyalsolearnharderan

6、dhard.Eventually,theyoftenhaveaprogress.Ithinkweshouldbepositivetowardit.itishelpfulforustostudy.Sowecansucceedinthefuture.(105词)Whichoneisbetter?Why?Conclusion1:要点全：覆盖了所有要点2:连贯性强：即过渡词、句的使用。3:词汇、句型和语法结构的多样化：高级词汇高级句型：定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句特殊句型：强调句、感叹句、倒装句、省略句增强书面表达效果的技巧1.高级的词汇2.丰富的句式1.既有意义又有挑战beboth__

7、______________________2.给某人最深刻的印象__________________________3.取得显著的进步make__________progress4.对……充耳不闻_______________5.感到筋疲力尽_______________6.在建造当中_______________________7.树立现实的目标set___________goals8.激烈的竞争___________competition9.很多的作业_____