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1、高班英语写作材料 写作检核表 1.关于标题 是否有标题?标题是否符合文章内容?标题是否太大,太空?标题写法是否正确? 2.关于文体 是否过于口语化?有些个人书信该用口语体时又是否用了太正规的书面语? 3.关于结构 结构是否合理?全文是否不止一段?是否完整,包括开头、正文和结尾?全文逻辑是否清晰?相对全文而言,开头或结尾是否太长? 4.关于段落 每一段是否有topicsentence?是否实现了unity,即每段只讲一个内容?文章coherence如何?是否运用了一些transition手段? 段落中是否包含了不相关
2、的论据?每一段中的论据能支持该段的主题句吗?论据的安排是否按照一定的维度或层级结构? 5.关于表达 句子的形式是否多样化?文中是否用到了大学阶段的单词和短语?是否偶尔用到强调句、倒装句、谚语、名人名言、修辞手法?时态、人称、数上是否一致?拼写、语法方面是否有错误?大小写和标点方面是否有错误? 要避免的低级错误 文中夹杂汉字;用了顿号、书名号;句子中间到处打点;Takesth.asanexample.后用逗号;Because从句单独使用;阿拉伯数字、年代小写;写信时日期写在信尾,还采用中国式写法;用了call110/120等中国
3、特有的号码;将祈使句误用为激励自己;书名、电影名未用斜体。 写作中的维度和层级结构 Renumberthesentencestoarrangetheminwhatyouthinkisthebestorder. Thecontrollingidea:SinceIbeganlivinginanapartmentandgoingtoschool,mybiggestproblemhasbeenthehousework. Cookingmyfoodisabiggerproblem. Theworstproblemisdoingmyla
4、undry. Cleaningtheapartmentisnottoobad,althoughittakestimeawayfrommystudies;atleast whenIfinshtheapartmentlooksnice. Sometimesthefoodisburned,sometimesitisnotcookedenough,andsometimesIhavenot measuredcorrectly,sothefoodtastesterrible. Shoppingformyfoodismoredifficu
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