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1、WritingTask1:GrammaticalStructurestoUseDecideifthefollowingsentencesarecorrectornot.Ifthey’renot,maketheappropriatechanges.Alsoaskyourselfiftheycanbeimprovedbycombiningshortonestogethertomakealonger,complexone.1.Mobilephoneaccesssurpassedhomecomputer
2、access.Itrisingto70%by2003.Mobilephoneaccesssurpassedhomecomputeraccess,whichroseto70%by2003.risingNote:InTask1,you’llhaveseveralfiguresfromthedatatowriteabout.Inordertodowell,you’llneedtousecomplexstructuresthatpresentseveraldatapointsinonesentence(
3、ratherthanwriteeachpointinmultiple,simplesentences).Intheaboveexample,youcanuse“which”+verb,oran“-ing”worddirectlyfollowingacomma.Thefirstclauseinthesentenceis“independent”,meaningitcanstandaloneasacompletesentence,whilethesecondclauseis“dependent”–i
4、tneedsthefirstclausetobecomplete.Essentially,thesecond,dependentclauseisoptional–itsimplyprovidesextrainformationtothereader.SeeingastherearemanydatapointstopresentinTask1,you’llwanttouseextraclausesoften;doingsowillgreatlyincreaseyourchancesofscorin
5、gwellinGrammar.2.Internetaccesswasintroducedin1998,whichgrewrapidlyoverthenext5yearperiod,reachedapeakin2003with42%ofusers.Internetaccesswasintroducedin1998,whichgrewrapidlyoverthenext5yearperiod,reachingapeakin2003with42%ofusers.Note:Thecorrectedsen
6、tenceshowsyouahighlycomplexstructurethathas3clauses:thefirstisindependentandusesasimpleverbtense;theseconduses“which”+verb;thelastoneusesan“ing”worddirectlyfollowingacomma.3.ThepercentageofInternetaccessincreasedsignificantlytoapproximately45%from199
7、9to2003.RoughlyNote:Usethewords“approximately”or“roughly”(oreven“nearly”)todescribedatainTask1insteadofusing“about”or“almost”.4.Salesofmobilephonesexperiencedanupwardtrendoverthegivenperiod.TheprofitreachedapeakinDecember.Salesofmobilephonesexperienc
8、edanupwardtrendoverthegivenperiod,withtheprofitreachingapeakinDecember.Note:Thestructureinthecorrectedsentenceuses“with”+noun+“-ing”(the“ing”isagerund,whichisanounformedfromaverb)5.CDplayeraccesswashighestoverthe7yearperiod.Anditgrewfrom60%in1996toap