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1、英语科技文章写作中的常见问题1.结构混杂科技英语中表达一种思想时最好用一种结构。不要将两种结构混在一起。Wearerecommendingwhatprocedurethatyoushouldfollow.这里用了what就不能再用that,应改为:Wearerecommendingtheprocedurethatyoushouldfollow.Wearerecommendingwhatprocedureyoushouldfollow.Thenewfanwillbeinstalledinsuchaplaceso
2、thatthewholeareawillbecooled.Such后应跟as或that,而不应再用sothat,也即such和sothat重叠。应改为:Thenewfanwillbeinstalledinsuchaplaceastocoolthewholearea.或者:Thenewfanwillbeinstalledinsuchaplacethatthewholeareawillbecooled.“Overlappedvalves”iswhentheexhaustandtheintakevalvesareo
3、pensimultaneouslyforaninstant.Is后要求跟表语,但when后引出状语从句。应改为:“Overlappedvalves”occurswhentheexhaustandtheintakevalvesareopensimultaneouslyforaninstant.或者:“Overlappedvalves”isbriefsimultaneouslyopeningoftheexhaustandtheintakevalves.2结构不全从句中省略主语是有条件的,不能随便省略。Weshal
4、lappreciateanysuggestionsthatyoumakeandarereadytoanswerfurtherquestionsifyouhavethem.并列句are前省略了主语we,但are离you比离we近,易误解为youarereadyto。所以此处we不能省,应改为:Weshallappreciateanysuggestionsthatyoumakeandwearereadytoanswerfurtherquestionsifyouhavethem.Theboilingpointoft
5、hesolutionishigherthanthatofanyofitsseparatecomponent.不同事物不能相比,应改为:Theboilingpointofthesolutionishigherthananyofitsseparatecomponent.Cokehasprovedtobemoreefficientthananyfuelwehavetried.这里coke好像不是fuel,必须加入other或else,应改为:Cokehasprovedtobemoreefficientthanany
6、otherfuelwehavetried.或者:Cokehasprovedtobemoreefficientthananyfuelelsewehavetried.3结构中断相互关联的事物尽可能放在一起,否则易生误会。Thehopper,unlessitisscrapedfrequently,becomescakedwithslag.应改为:Unlessthehopperisscrapedfrequently,itbecomescakedwithslag.或者:Thehopperbecomescakedwith
7、slag,unlessitisscrapedfrequently.Ihave,asyourequestedinyourletterof...,investigatedthepossibilitiesofenlargingourlaboratories.应改为:Asyourequestedinyourletterof...,Ihaveinvestigatedthepossibilitiesofenlargingourlaboratories.或者:Ihaveinvestigatedthepossibilitie
8、sofenlargingourlaboratories,asyourequestedinyourletterof...4复合句前后不一致(1)主语不一致Theregulationsrequireeachmantowearauniform,hemustalsocoverhismouthandnosewithamaskbeforeenteringthelaboratory.应改为:Theregulati
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