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7、shocked.病句:Hearthenews,Iwasshocked.Iwasshockedatthenews.chz学生习作评讲chz视听的时候,只听其音量,不要试图听明白其内容.Abouton-linefriendsMoreandmorepeoplemakeon-linefriendsontheinternet.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeopleagreetomakeon-linefriends.Itmakeuscanmakemorefr
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