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1、看图作文讲评9芳芳是个好学生。请根据下面5幅图用英语写一篇短文,词数120以上.如果单从画面看,所得的信息无非是:一天夜里,风刮得很大。芳芳两点钟起床,赶到学校,把窗户关好后回家。如果你就按上述所看到的信息去写,肯定拿不到高分。这是篇记叙文,记叙了芳芳做好事的前后经过。但记叙离不开人。所以要根据“芳芳是个好学生”这个信息对人物展开合理的想象:FangFangisagoodstudent.Shelivesnearherschool.Thistermshewaselectedmonitorofherclass.Sheisaveryresponsiblefo
2、rherclasswork.给下面的叙述奠定了基础。第一步:就事论事Thewindwasblowingheavily.FangFanggotuprightaway.Itwas2o’clock.Afterawhileshegotuptotheschool.Sheclosedthewindowsofherclassroom.Shelefttheclassroomandwenthome.Onenight,itwasblowingoutside.ThewindstruckthewindowsoheavilythatthenoisewokeupFangFang.
3、第二步:合理想象Thewindblowinginthroughtheopenwindowmadeherfeelabitcold.Sheknewaheavyrainwouldsoonarrive.Shethoughtofherclassroomagain.Shewonderedwhetherthestudentsondutyhadclosedthewindowsproperly.Shegotupandputonherclothes.Itwasthen2o’clock.Shedecidedtogooutrightaway,andgettotheschool
4、beforethestormcame.Sheopenedthedoor,andrushedoutintothedark.Ontheway,thestrongwindmadeitdifficultforhertogoforwardquickly.inspiteofthis,sheranasfastaspossible,andafterawhileshegottotheschool.Shehurriedrighttoherclassroomandopenedthedoor.Oh,dear!Allthewindowswereopen,andthestrong
5、windfilledtheclassroomwithgreatnoise.itwasnotatalleasyforhertoshutupallthewindows.Sheturnedoffthelightandwasleavingtheclassroomwhensheturnedaroundtomakesureallthingsweredonewell.Justthenitbegantorainheavily.whenshegothome,itwasalreadyhalfpastthree.第三步:整理成文根据合理的想象和字数限制合成一篇短文Oneni
6、ght,thewindwasblowingoutsideandstruckthewindowsoheavilythatthenoisewokeupFangFang.Thewindblowinginthroughtheopenwindowmadeherfeelabitcold.Sheknewaheavyrainwouldsoonarrivewhenshewonderedwhetherthestudentsondutyhadclosedthewindowsproperly.Itwasthen2o’clockbutshetogooutrightaway,an
7、dgettotheschoolbeforethestormcame.Sheopenedthedoor,andrushedoutintothedark.Ontheway,thestrongwindmadeitdifficultforhertogoforwardquickly.Inspiteofthis,sheranasfastaspossible,andafterawhileshegottotheschool.Shehurriedrighttoherclassroomandopenedthedoor.Oh,dear!Allthewindowswereop
8、en,andsheshutupallthewindowsonebyone.Sheturnedo