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1、如何提高英语写作技巧沧源民族中学朱雪华例题:阅读下文,注意划线部分。指出划线部分属于什么成分、起什么用?Recentlyourclasshadaheateddiscussionoverwhethermiddleschoolstudentsshouldmakefriendsonline.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplesayyes.Theythinkthattheinternethelpsmakemorefriends.Andchattingonline,studentscanmore
2、freelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions.Besides,theymayevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,however,thinkstudentsshouldnot.Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime.Andtheyshouldspendtimemoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.Itismyopinionthats
3、tudentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecaneasilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.本篇文章使用了一些高级词汇(指运用恰当的形容词或副词等)如:recently,heated,even等;运用了从句、非谓语动词、连词、介词短语等,使文章内容丰富,语言紧凑却很流畅。1.我正要出去,天突然下雨了。普通句:Iwasabouttogoout,anditsuddenlystar
4、tedtorain.高级句:Iwasabouttogooutwhenitstartedtorain.(when=atthattime)区别在于:那么为何要运用高级词汇、从句、非谓语动、连词、介词短语并且如何恰当运用呢?看下面的句子,区别在哪呢?高级句中用了一个固定搭配beabouttodo…when…(正准备…这时…)2.当我走进教室的时候,听见学生朗读英语。普通句:WhenIenteredtheclassroom,IheardthestudentsreadingEnglish.高级句:Enteringtheclassroom,Iheardthe
5、studentsreadingEnglish.区别在于:(现在分词短语相当于时间状语从句,用一般式)3.从山上看去,这个村庄样子更加漂亮了。普通句:①Whenweseethevillagefromthehill,thevillagelooksmuchmorebeautiful.②Whenitisseenfromthehill,thevillagelooksmuchbeautiful.高级句:Seenfromthehill,thevillagelooksmuchmorebeautiful.区别在于:(过去分词短语相当于时间状语从句)4.努力工作,你
6、就会成功。普通句:Ifyouworkhard,youwillsucceed.高级句:Workinghard,youwillsucceed.区别在于:(现在分词短语作条件状语)5.玛丽亚的妈妈直到上周末才从美国纽约来到北京。普通句:Maria’smotherdidn’tarriveinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmericauntillastweekend.高级句:NotuntillastweekenddidMaria’smotherarriveinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmerica.高级句:Itwasnotunt
7、illastweekendthatMaria’smotherarrivedinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmerica.区别在于:(运用了倒装和强调句)6.只有改变我们的生活方式,我们才能拯救地球。普通句:Wecansavetheearthonlybychangingtheway,welive.高级句:Onlybychangingthewaywelivecanwesavetheearth.高级句:Itisonlybychangingthewaywelivethatwecansavetheearth.区别在于:(运用了倒装和强调句)7
8、.天色已晚,你最好不要一人回家。普通句:Asitislate,you’dbetternotgohomealone.高级句:Itbeing
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