如何提高英语写作技巧.ppt

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1、如何提高英语写作技巧沧源民族中学朱雪华例题：阅读下文，注意划线部分。指出划线部分属于什么成分、起什么用？Recentlyourclasshadaheateddiscussionoverwhethermiddleschoolstudentsshouldmakefriendsonline.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplesayyes.Theythinkthattheinternethelpsmakemorefriends.Andchattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheir

2、feelingsandopinions.Besides，theymayevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,however,thinkstudentsshouldnot.Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime.Andtheyshouldspendtimemoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.Itismyopinionthatstudentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healtha

3、ndsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecaneasilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.本篇文章使用了一些高级词汇(指运用恰当的形容词或副词等)如:recently,heated,even等；运用了从句、非谓语动词、连词、介词短语等，使文章内容丰富，语言紧凑却很流畅。1.我正要出去，天突然下雨了。普通句：Iwasabouttogoout，anditsuddenlystartedtorain.高级句：Iwasabouttogooutwhenitstartedtorain.（whe

4、n＝atthattime）区别在于：那么为何要运用高级词汇、从句、非谓语动、连词、介词短语并且如何恰当运用呢？看下面的句子，区别在哪呢？高级句中用了一个固定搭配beabouttodo…when…（正准备…这时…）2.当我走进教室的时候，听见学生朗读英语。普通句：WhenIenteredtheclassroom，IheardthestudentsreadingEnglish.高级句：Enteringtheclassroom，IheardthestudentsreadingEnglish.区别在于：（现在分词短语相当于时间状语从句，用一般式）3.从山上看去，这个村庄样子更加漂亮了。普通

5、句：①Whenweseethevillagefromthehill,thevillagelooksmuchmorebeautiful.②Whenitisseenfromthehill，thevillagelooksmuchbeautiful.高级句：Seenfromthehill，thevillagelooksmuchmorebeautiful.区别在于：（过去分词短语相当于时间状语从句）4.努力工作，你就会成功。普通句：Ifyouworkhard，youwillsucceed.高级句：Workinghard，youwillsucceed.区别在于：（现在分词短语作条件状语）5.玛

6、丽亚的妈妈直到上周末才从美国纽约来到北京。普通句：Maria’smotherdidn’tarriveinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmericauntillastweekend.高级句：NotuntillastweekenddidMaria’smotherarriveinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmerica.高级句：ItwasnotuntillastweekendthatMaria’smotherarrivedinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmerica.区别在于：（运用了倒装和强调句）6.只有改变我们的生活方式，我们才能拯救地球。普通

7、句：Wecansavetheearthonlybychangingtheway,welive.高级句:Onlybychangingthewaywelivecanwesavetheearth.高级句：Itisonlybychangingthewaywelivethatwecansavetheearth.区别在于：（运用了倒装和强调句）7.天色已晚，你最好不要一人回家。普通句：Asitislate，you’dbetternotgohomealone.高级句：Itbeing