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1、汉英翻译常见错误分析一、汉英翻译错误分析大自然对人的恩赐,无论贫富,一律平等。所以人们对于大自然,全部一致并深深地依赖着。尤其在乡间,上千年来人们一直以不变的方式生活着。种植庄稼和葡萄,酿酒和饮酒,喂牛和挤奶,锄草和栽花;在周末去教堂祈祷和做礼拜,在节日到广场拉琴、跳舞和唱歌。往日的田园依旧是今日的温馨家园。这样,每个地方都有自己的传说,风俗也就衍传了下来。常见错误一:词汇错误1.词的理解偏差2.词的上下搭配词汇错误1:词义理解偏差(大自然的)恩赐:presents人,人们:humanbeings,men种植(庄稼和葡萄):plantcropsandgrapes栽(花):pl
2、antflowers锄草:getridofgrass温馨家园:warmhouses,warmresidences,warmfamily词汇错误2:词的上下搭配错误喂牛和挤奶:牛:cattle(牛,总称);bull(公牛);cow(母牛);calf(牛犊);ox(牛,统称;或公牛);bullock(阉牛);buffalo(水牛)错译:feedbullsandmilkcow(喂公牛和挤母牛的奶);feedoxenandmilkthem;feedbullsformilk词汇错误2:词的上下搭配错误喂牛和挤奶:改译:使用及物动词,feedcattleandmilkcows,feedc
3、owsandmilkthem,feedandmilkcows,feedcowsformilk;使用不及物动词,feedcattleandmilk,feedcowsandmilk词汇错误2:词的上下搭配错误酿酒和饮酒:酒:alcohol,wine,liquor,spirits,beer,whisky错译:brewwineanddrinkalcohol,brewspiritsanddrinkwine,brewwineanddrinkbeer词汇错误2:词的上下搭配错误酿酒和饮酒:改译:使用使用及物动词,brewanddrinkwine;使用不及物动词,brewanddrink词汇
4、错误2:词的上下搭配错误一致并深深地依赖:dependdeeplyandunanimously,dependdeeplyandidentically种植(庄稼和葡萄):raisecropsandgrapes栽(花):raiseflowers锄草:getridofgrass温馨家园:warmfamily常见错误二:词语顺序无论贫富:poorandrich,whetherwearepoorornot跳舞和唱歌:danceandsing常见错误三:语篇错误1.逐字翻译,画蛇添足2.重复不当,不合习惯3.断句不当,割裂语篇语篇错误1:逐字翻译,画蛇添足例1、在周末去教堂祈祷和做礼拜,
5、在节日到广场拉琴、跳舞和唱歌。原译:Onweekendstheygotochurchtoprayanddoreligiousservices;inholidaytheygotothesquaretoplaymusicalinstruments,danceandsing.语篇错误1:逐字翻译,画蛇添足例1、在周末去教堂祈祷和做礼拜,在节日到广场拉琴、跳舞和唱歌。改译:Onweekendstheygotochurch,andonholidaystheyenjoyplayingmusicwhilesinginganddancinginopensquares语篇错误1:逐字翻译,画蛇
6、添足例2、往日的田园依旧是今日的温馨家园。原译:Thosefieldsinthepast/ofyesterdayarestillcozyhomelandsatpresent/nowadays/oftoday.改译::Thustheiroldenhomelandsremainassweetasever…语篇错误2:重复不当,不合习惯例3、所以人们对于大自然,全部一致并深深地依赖着。尤其在乡间,上千年来人们一直以不变的方式生活着。原译:Sopeoplealldeeplydependonnature.Especiallyinthecountryside,peoplekeeptheu
7、nchangeablewayoflivesforthousandsofyears.语篇错误2:重复不当,不合习惯例3、所以人们对于大自然,全部一致并深深地依赖着。尤其在乡间,上千年来人们一直以不变的方式生活着。改译:Thataccountsfortheirdeep-rootedattachmenttoher,especiallyinthecountrywheretheirwaysoflifehavebeenkeptintactforthousandsofyears.语篇错误3:断句不当,割裂语篇例3、大