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6、吹拂下响起的沙沙声,鸟儿的啼叫声,行人的脚步声等;闻到了花草和泥土的芳香;看到了能经受住严寒和大风的树叶如蝴蝶般纷纷落下。由此作者联想到当前的形势:中华民族能不畏强暴,为何如此轻易地受SARS攻击?本文从视觉、嗅觉和听觉三方面带领读者进入一个春天的世界,全方位地感受春天的气息。文章的一大特色是作者运用了大量象声词,如therustlingfleaves;thehisperingandhulingandbieringfbirds;thetrtting,shuffling,trapingfpeplepassingb;blusteri
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